The Author notes are fantastic
Thank you for the author's notes. Very helpful and appreciated
? which previous question. whether or not he's ever had his fill or whether or not he thought he could be forgiven by the sky god?
"Well, your hands are pretty nice. Long fingers, broad palm. No wonder I didn't notice when you stole my things. You haven't answered my previous question yet, have you?"
Kind-hearted Grim Reaper
Fantasy · Tang Jia San Shao
author, I am proud and happy that you admitted at the beginning of the book that you were doing a lot of rewriting and you knew there was mistakes in the amount of mistakes are outstandingly large mostly with misspellings but other things as well but luckily still I am able to read it and understand everything you wanted to present it will be quite a good book when you get all the errors completed
hi author I like your story. but on the last sentence of this chapter it's a little awkward the way it's written maybe add the words for the first time since My adoptive parents death I feel happy.
Author, iruppted is not a word.. maybe you meant invaded?
"She is not there" I mutter, my brain working on a dreadful image of what could have happened. "Elena irrupted in my room"
Her Return: A New Beginning
Urban · LunarKiss
Author fix error . Squeezing her throat
"Did you just threaten my mate?" I grow menacingly and I feel her confidence slipping. "Do something against her, and I won't care who your father is, I will kill you" I threaten her quizzing her throat one last time before letting her go. She tries to regain the air she lost. I wait, there was no way I will leave my room with her still there.
Her Return: A New Beginning
Urban · LunarKiss
the last paragraph is that him speaking in third person? or is there another book I will probably need to read to understand?
why doesn't he wash the chicken feathers and then use them to make a softer bed by making a mattress cushion out of them instead of burning them. it was mentioned previously that his bed was hard
Afterward, he boiled water to pluck feathers, setting aflame the feathers he'd plucked, washing the chicken clean before placing it in a clay pot, filling it with water, bringing it to a boil over a high flame, and then simmering it over a low flame.
Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant
Eastern · East Sea Fish Head
I thought she was only 9 years old and suddenly you know she's 11 years old
The Reborn Wife is Farming
General · Bamboo Rain Yu