I really appreciate your words of support and motivation; although english is not my native language, i try my best to improve in my writing.
thank you, I really appreciate it
"I am a Witch" he replied
The Lord
Fantasy · WarSon
Yes, I know; the beginning of the story was extremely improvised, it was from the chapter entitled 'Viktor Drichey' that I began to take this about being a writer more seriously
"I am a Witch" he replied
The Lord
Fantasy · WarSon
Currently I can no longer modify the story, as it has already been marked as finished. At the moment I am working on a rework of the base of the story. the changes will be added as special chapters in the new story that I will publish soon
She closed her eyes and tried to remember how to do what had given her his title.
The Lord
Fantasy · WarSon
most of it is explanation about mechanics, and character introduction; in deep fog you will see that the information will drop suddenly. The explanations are mainly detailed because I seek to capture a balanced and well-implemented system. Overlord was heavily inspired by D&D, but it's an unbalanced world (like many Isekai) where it's impossible to feel that the main characters are in danger. for my part I was inspired by pathfinder, literally each of the characters that are in my story are 100% playable in pathfinder, everything that I show in the story is part of the pathfinder game system; the only thing I had to change was the magic system, because for the novel I had to give a more abstract explanation
The latter was a complicated figure to describe, although he was dressed in a maid uniform, his short stature and androgynous features made it difficult to identify his gender, at first glance he could be seen as an adorable child with clothes of the opposite sex, but if he was carefully examined and Due to her apparent age, it was difficult to identify her real gender, but if the above were not enough, on her head and slightly hidden by her maid hat, were a cute cat ears.
The Lord
Fantasy · WarSon
if you already have experience in RPGs, you can skip the chapters until you reach Deep Fog. although you may miss the introduction of some characters
The latter was a complicated figure to describe, although he was dressed in a maid uniform, his short stature and androgynous features made it difficult to identify his gender, at first glance he could be seen as an adorable child with clothes of the opposite sex, but if he was carefully examined and Due to her apparent age, it was difficult to identify her real gender, but if the above were not enough, on her head and slightly hidden by her maid hat, were a cute cat ears.
The Lord
Fantasy · WarSon
really with the restructuring of the first chapters (approximately half of the first story arc) the errors that I have noticed and the errors that you (the readers) have pointed out to me, I have corrected them, I make sure to move the beginning as far as possible from overlord, but I had a problem, Webnovel only allows to make small changes in an already published chapter, so I decided to finish this story, finish some writing courses that I'm doing and then do the continuation of this story, where I will publish special chapters that will replace chapters of this story.
The latter was a complicated figure to describe, although he was dressed in a maid uniform, his short stature and androgynous features made it difficult to identify his gender, at first glance he could be seen as an adorable child with clothes of the opposite sex, but if he was carefully examined and Due to her apparent age, it was difficult to identify her real gender, but if the above were not enough, on her head and slightly hidden by her maid hat, were a cute cat ears.
The Lord
Fantasy · WarSon
I would really like to show the changes, because I literally rewrote all the first chapters from 0, but I had a problem, Webnovel only allows small changes from a chapter that was already published; for that reason I finished this story, in the future I plan to publish the continuation, in said continuation I will publish special chapters that replace chapters of my first story
"Now ... Now is not the time for that kind of thing."
The Lord
Fantasy · WarSon
I apologize for the errors, English is not my native language, as the chapters progress the errors disappear. I am currently working on a complete restructuring of the first chapters where I will change how the story starts and make sure there are no mistakes
In an attempt to avert her gaze from him, she lowered his eyes but found Keil's breasts, the shapely and balanced twin peaks of his. He was in direct contact with his body.
The Lord
Fantasy · WarSon
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original The Lord: Black Hearts
Concluído
An impossible mission in the dark fantasy world of The Lord. They have nothing to lose… except their souls! Sentenced to death, Reiner Blackbrick and his cellmates have an opportunity to escape the hangman's noose: a mission to recover a sacred object found in a territory held by the forces of the dark gods, the demon worshippers. The odds are stacked against them, the enemy is closing in, and to make matters worse, they can't count on anyone to help them. It is an impossible mission that only hopeless people would be able to complete.32 Chs 3 Coleções
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The Dark Hero Adventures
Concluído
Leaving the city of Riverheim behind, along with an epic inn binge and a wild night out, Elysia, an ex-slave catgirl, was thrilled to learn that Frey, the dark hero and the person who promised to protect her, intended to meet a heroic death in battle to atone for a personal misfortune, Elysia swore she would follow him and recount his adventures in an epic novel. At dawn the next day, Elysia realized the madness that she had done, and by her oath she would accompany the dark hero in all her crazy misadventures, fighting against horrible creatures that neither Elysia nor she knew could reach. exist. Some extraordinary adventures in which Elysia will try to survive the fate of her partner, something that will not be easy. She will have to fight against demon worshipers, insidious Goblins, savage orcs, grotesque mutants, powerful champions of the dark gods and many other terrible enemies.121 Chs 29 Coleções
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The Lord
Concluído
This is the story of a normal person, who had a great fondness for role-playing games, in such a way that all his free time was dedicated to them. Suddenly, one day he closes his eyes and is sent to a world of magic and fantasy, in which he became the final boss of an imposing magical castle and in his position as overlord he will change the course of his new world forever. Follow the story of the inhabitants of Damenburg Castle and immerse yourself in an incredible story in a world of magic and medieval fantasy from the villain's perspective147 Chs 909 Coleções
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Delite 534
Leaving the city of Riverheim behind, along with an epic inn binge and a wild night out, Elysia, an ex-slave catgirl, was thrilled to learn that Frey, the dark hero and the person who promised to protect her, intended to meet a heroic death in battle to atone for a personal misfortune, Elysia swore she would follow him and recount his adventures in an epic novel. At dawn the next day, Elysia realized the madness that she had done, and by her oath she would accompany the dark hero in all her crazy misadventures, fighting against horrible creatures that neither Elysia nor she knew could reach. exist. Some extraordinary adventures in which Elysia will try to survive the fate of her partner, something that will not be easy. She will have to fight against demon worshipers, insidious Goblins, savage orcs, grotesque mutants, powerful champions of the dark gods and many other terrible enemies.24 Chs 2 Coleções
Greetings, I am interested in your offer, a week ago I sent you an email
The Dark Hero Adventures
Fantasy · WarSon