Thomas_Gheerbrant

LV 14
2021-05-22 Unido Global
Emblemas 7

Moments 4
Thomas_Gheerbrant
Thomas_Gheerbrant
2 years ago
Posted

Although the start is a bit slow, thé characters are well developped and the story and feeling about it is quite cherry. No romance for now, however it's not really needed here, I think.

Thomas_Gheerbrant
Thomas_Gheerbrant
2 years ago
Posted

The protagonist seems to have a good base for the dévelopment of thé story. It's rather sad that the world description is totally left unfinished.

Thomas_Gheerbrant
Thomas_Gheerbrant
2 years ago
Posted

It has a great setting, only the description of the world where MC lives in not really complete as of now. There is no evident plot either, story simple unfold quietly for now, which I found unjoyable.

Thomas_Gheerbrant
Thomas_Gheerbrant
2 years ago
Commented

Great