It would be better if the author can cut down the method of revenge, Ren's character development has been very good until now. Wasting away a good written character for some biased view called revenge is such a waste. After all he doesn't need revenge, it was his own fault, a pragmatic protagonist is always liked by the media compared to smn who is arrogant n cocky wo the oblivious reasons
[Ren: What do y'all know bout revenge?]
Transmigrating as an Extra Third-Rate Villain
Huyền huyễn · avbutt
Pls don't make the MC op.
Author a point to be noted: The story is quite interesting but you are dragging certain slice of life chapters a lot. Like the previous one. Wasting one whole chapter on just explaining the room and stuff is not commendable. I would recommend you to split up your paras more and shorten the neighborhood for the plot pace to pick up.
Hey author, can youmake the chapters a bit more lengthy?, the story is very good but is held back by how small the length is.
excellent story and good concept but does it have any kind of romance
" Unless you Know what the numbers mean you can't really do anything with them" - Entrail_JI That was a bit funny pardon me 🤣🤣.
Bruh whats with the power scale?? I wanted to ask this for a long time but how was he level 19 and still without any spells at the start of the series. And if his rate of progression is quite fast then why did it take him soo long to learn the spell??
What If Julien uses the strings as his defense, (bcoz he said he lacks em) you know like how John Smith (eminence from shadow) used to fight against Alpha.... Idk just my opinion but thought it'd be cool, what do u think author??
We shld get more of Leon and Julien moments, it's kinda like reading best frnds quarrel 🤣
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original Tales of a Detestable Noble
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Money, fame, power and recognition. Few of the most important sought-out qualities pursued by a man. They say that no amount of such qualities satisfy oneself. Follow the story of a man devoid of money, fame, power or recognition, slowly step up his way to the top, gaining everything his family once had lost. Follow his journey from a despicable unworthy noble to that of being the most sought out and respected. Follow this beautiful tale of fire and steel as it dances it's way cutting down the unjust in it's path. This is the tales of a detestable noble transforming into that of an admirable aristocrat. Tags- Pragmatic protagonist, Ruthless when needed, soft at other times, puts family before anything.... __________________ I'm greatly inspired by TBATE, one of the classics out there. (The cover is not mine. If the original creator wants it removed please contact me)30 Chs 128 Coleções
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Divinity and Mortals
THOU SHALL AWAKEN THEE WRATH OF HUMANS; THOU SHALL SEEK VENGENCE; SHOULD YOU FORGET THY'S WORK: THEN THE DEMONS SHALL RISE....... BLOOD SHALL SHED.... LIVES SHALL SUFFER... TRUTH SHALL SUPPRESS.... SINS SHALL BE FORGIVEN........ NEVER SHALL THY FORGET: FOR YOU SHALL FACE THE DEMISE OR SHALL FACE THE REBIRTH OF THE WORLD........ ......................................... Follow the life of our protagonist in a world filled with chaos and amidst all that he must fulfill a task given to him. In an unknown place, without memories and no one to support him.... How shall he survive and how can he gain the trust of the people who sees him as a sinner. Get your popcorn; pack your bags, get some drinks: Because we are in for one hell of a ride....... Hi guys, This is my second novel, be sure to check out my first one 'THE REMINISCENCE OF LIFE'. I'm open for recommendations and tips. Thank you. Novel for WSA 230 Chs 12 Coleções
Author, I want u to read this and properly read this. Firstly ur perception of what a hero is gone. Saving a person doesn't mean he is a hero. You save them because they're in danger let alone and adult or a child. Secondly using the so called skills of the mc increases the chances of even the kid lily dying from the collar bursting it was stupid, unpragramatic. If u wanted to introduce such a segment you shldve done it when he was stronger or with more allies. Pls note that there is no person who can survive being alone, the concept of lone wolf doesn't exist. Be it in a book or in life. And yes, WT U JUST WROTE IS NOT A GOOD OF PIECE OF ART BUT A BAD NONCHALANT WRITING. Ik my reviews r strict and I'm only giving u this bcoz ur novel has good potential. Never write such a chapter again. Think before u put in ur art and creativity.....
The Time I Got Reincarnated As An Extra
Huyền huyễn · Tsukasa0