AprilFiction

AprilFiction

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AprilFiction
AprilFiction
3 years ago
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( Written with the translator ) I believe that Jin Woo’s strength at the end of the novel only became limited because he decided to abandon the System and live a 'normal' life. In my view, it would have an unlimited (but very long) growth with the help of the System, which at no time showed a real limit. Not to mention himself and his shadows, which could easily get stronger and stronger. Generally speaking, the Jin Woo of the novel ending is not a true power in the DC world, but it could very well become one if it had not made the decision to abandon the System. At least that’s my point of view.

Este livro foi excluído.
AprilFiction
AprilFiction
3 years ago
Replied to Onxio

Think on the good side, it's only a hiatus and not the story stopping forever. I will come back to post more chapters someday, but until then I'll be focusing on another one I'm about to make (because I can't stand not writing anything). Maybe the new story will even have a few Undertale aspects in it, who knows.

Since I started posting this story, I have only received bad news and it ended my will to continue writing it (among the bad news: a family member died{Suicide}).

A Minus in Multiverse[Hiatus]

A Minus in Multiverse[Hiatus]

Anime & Comics · AprilFiction

AprilFiction
AprilFiction
3 years ago
Posted

( Written with the help of the Translator ) | ( There are obvious errors in the Message, this was written at dawn and I’m definitely not energetic enough to correct each error ) Overall, in the few chapters that history has shown so far, the work has an extremely promising future. The other reviews of people complaining about the Protagonist being a servant and nonsense of this kind, are unfortunately made by readers who do not know how to enjoy a good story. And for those of you who are concerned about the main character being a servant, relax. The Protagonist has so far proved intelligent with certain actions and the author maintains the level of servitude in an acceptable margin, nothing exaggerated so far. So it is not necessary to worry about getting the wrong idea of silly comments like 'The protagonist counts too much for his master'' or 'He knelt to his master, that is annoying'. They’re just kids who don’t know how to make the most of a story. Keep up the good work!

AprilFiction
AprilFiction
3 years ago
Commented

( Written with the help of the translator ) I like that one. He is following an interesting pace and he is only saying what is necessary to facilitate his new life in this world, instead of telling her that her existence was decided by a Human with a pencil and paper. Overall, continue with the good work author! If you want a hint from me, try to ignore the complaints of the Protagonist getting too low (kneeling and serving) or saying certain information. It takes a decent interaction for a story to develop. Soon, it is perfectly fine everything you have done so far, just avoid exaggerating too much in the actions more 'servants', because it can end up crossing the line sometimes.

AprilFiction
AprilFiction
3 years ago
Commented

I don't think it's considered a harem.

There, just like everyone wanted, well, I really wanted the rabbit goddess, but is two already considered harem? I dont think so right?

The Hidden Village: Naruto Fanfic(Finished)

The Hidden Village: Naruto Fanfic(Finished)

Anime & Comics · LazyTanaka

AprilFiction
AprilFiction
3 years ago
Replied to AprilFiction

Same Here*

"I want a Spear! I want the one Odin has - Gungnir!"

In Black Clover as a SpearSaint

In Black Clover as a SpearSaint

Anime & Comics · An1x

AprilFiction
AprilFiction
3 years ago
Replied to nutt

Right here. In the work of the Spear Hero (made especially for him), this spear can even make him Immortal and go back in time :/

"I want a Spear! I want the one Odin has - Gungnir!"

In Black Clover as a SpearSaint

In Black Clover as a SpearSaint

Anime & Comics · An1x

AprilFiction
AprilFiction
3 years ago
Commented

I’m being completely honest. I was looking for some good fanfiction that involves the Omnitrix and finally found one, thank you so much for doing this work. So far she has shown herself amazing, I hope to see more chapters in the future.

AprilFiction
AprilFiction
3 years ago
Replied to TakoBocchi07

''( If the message is confusing, I’m sorry. ) Both have extreme weaknesses that can be exploited. Undyne cannot remain in that mode for long, and if she is killed before she can become determined enough, she does not even enter that mode. Sans, as long as you don’t touch his brother, he won’t act as harshly as in the genocide route. He’s someone extremely lazy. Doesn’t mean you're gonna get away with killing some monster. Overall, as long as you don’t try to kill anyone, Undertale can be solved solely with conversation (including Chara, Asriel and Frisk).''

AprilFiction
AprilFiction
3 years ago
Replied to Banana_Split_69

Something like that. I’m not sure yet because the pair for the Protagonist is not yet set in my mind. But the character who is winning agaist all the others easily so far is Chara. By chapter 15 I must have decided the pair.

  • A Minus in Multiverse[Hiatus] original

    A Minus in Multiverse[Hiatus]

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY OVERPOWERED NARUTO VIDEOGAME

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    The story focuses on 'Kumagawa Misogi', a 6-year-old with a bizarre mentality. Through a contract, Kumagawa is thrown through the Multiverse in search of entertainment for himself and with the goal of entertaining the higher being who made his journey possible. And now with only basic knowledge provided to him by this 'higher being', Kumagawa must turn to survive and have as much fun as possible in these worlds, while trying to entertain his 'supporter'. ( The story contains 'age progression', as the story progresses the MC also ages. Until the 2° or 3° world he must be about 15 to 18 years old. ) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I don't own the cover image. If the owner wants me to remove it, message me and I'll do so. I don't own the following works: Chainsaw Man, Medaka Box, Fairy Tail, Undertale and Jujutsu Kaisen. All credits reserved to their respective authors. Aside from the main character, I do not own any of the characters. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- - The work is not a harem. - The work has a slow pacing, I don't wish to make it progress too quickly. - Torture, cannibalism, rape and many other scenes will be highly likely in the work. It's a dark work, so be careful before reading. - This is the first work I'm posting in this site, so I warn you that I'm not a great writer, I'm still learning. - English is not my native language, so naturally there can be errors in writing.

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