I am interested in reading more!
So far its pretty good although the grammar isn't great.
I've liked it so far I really like the names of the characters and I've found it fairly easy to follow the story line and understand what's going on while reading it. I really like horses so it's always cool to read books that have them as the main focus in a good way. I can't wait to read more! Thank you for all the chapters you've released thus far!
Great chapter, I am interested to find out what happens next! Cant wait to read more!
what if he's working for that bald guy and those rogues?
"Why here then? I don't mean to be rude or anything, I just love to meet new people and to know about them. We don't get many here. So…." He said nervously.
The BloodRose
Fantasy · Akshata_Vaidya_6634
maybe she's just in her head too much?
After placing my things in their right places, I got out of the house and unlocked my car. I need to check the garage after I come back. I stumbled into my car after tripping over literally nothing. Yeah I have those days where I can trip on anything, including air.
The BloodRose
Fantasy · Akshata_Vaidya_6634
😂
That came out creepier than I expected.
The BloodRose
Fantasy · Akshata_Vaidya_6634
and the other horses too!
"GET AWAY FROM MY HORSE!" She screamed before sinking her swords into the back of the creature.
Heart Over Sword
Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz
These poor horses... Great story so far. I am getting spirit vibes though...
It's really good from what I've read, the grammar isn't that great but maybe in future chapters it'll be better. So far I think the character development/design is pretty good. I really think this book has lots of potential! I am going to be keeping an eye out for more chapters
The Life of A Horse Named Cloud
Fantasy · coolhorse202