This is a translation, but it is credited to the original author, which is fair. The grammar and writing quality is gradually improving through the chapters. The updates could be better, but I can not fault the uploader, because the chapters are very long. Overall it is pretty great fanfic.
This work might not be the original and the same fanfic seems to be already uploaded here with 30 chapters. However this is far better than the other one. The writing quality is top notch, practically no grammatical mistakes. Format is much better to read. The uploader also gives us pictures of the things he is talking about, like ships and characters, so that is pretty helpful. In overall this is a great work and I hope it won't get dropped.
Honestly, the pacing is very fast. It is refreshing to see the dance from the greens perspective and I think that this is a great idea. I also love that the mc is not the typical good guy. However the writing quality, the grammar is just so fucking horrible that it makes it hard to fully immerse and enjoy this fanfic.
So the ghimedri are really just space jews?
Great work, keep it up Great work, keep it up Great work, keep it up Great work, keep it up Great work, keep it up Great work, keep it up
Este livro foi excluído.
nice world of warcraft reference
"This wolf still has teeth!"
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
found it, thanks bro
So far it's pretty good. I haven't seen anything like this fanfic so it's pretty unique. Good grammar and mc doesn't seem incompetent.
good stuff, good writing quality, only problem is updating stability and there were times when I thought the author dropped. thank god he didn't, it's worth reading
With the SI Daemon turns into a spineless fag. A submissive and pathetic Mc that has no real goals. If you like to read about MCs that are masochistic and thinks that by avoiding to fight is him winning then go ahead, but otherwise this was a big waste of my time.
Reborn as Rogue prince
TV · flame_of_thrones