What I saw broke me, the love my life was sharing her bed with another man. ~~~ And then describe the anguish etc. You don’t have to describe everything especially this as it will drive tones of readers away. By going this route, Mc doesn’t see her in the act but the message that she was seeing someone else is clear as she is sleeping in bed with another man. Hope this helps as I truly want this story to keep going but know that you’ll receive an immense amount of hate for this.
With a trembling hand, I pushed open the grand mansion's double doors, brimming with excitement at the thought of seeing my beloved wife. But as I stepped inside, my world shattered into a million pieces. The sound of an all-too-familiar voice moaning someone else's name echoed through the courtyard.
TVD/TO: The Original Husband
TV · TheOneAtTheMoon
Story is pretty good the Harry Potter incorporation is truly great well done to the author on that front. Only problem I have with the story is Chapter 17 after Mc suffered an insuferable amount of trials to reunite with his lover, he finds her in the act with another man. Something rather normal as he was believed to be dead for thousands of years but the fact that the author decided to flesh out the s*x scene when Mc x Rebeccah s*x scene was left to readers imagination left to be desired. It makes me believe either the author enjoys seeing Mc suffer or is a c*ck. I truly despised that chapter and would recommend anyone reading this story to completely skip it. As it is simple cause for unecessary heart ache. But a scene doesn’t define a story as a whole so the story is still worth reading as long as you skip/rush over chapter 17.
Bro the worse is the legit description of the betrayal you can simply allude to it no need to describe the s*x scene. Literally made me boil with rage.
A/N: I know some of you guys might think it is unfair for Rebekah since she doesn't know that Cash is alive. And I totally agree but bear in mind that Cassius has literally been through hell to get back to Rebekah only to find her having sex with another man. Therefore, I think it is valid for him to be slightly pissed.
TVD/TO: The Original Husband
TV · TheOneAtTheMoon
This story is getting better and better great job author 👍 Liking the direction this is taking so far.
"Before you ask what Mana is, let me finish. When you were transmigrated into this body, I should have already set up your body with 'Magic Circuits'. This magic circuit will allow you to summon Mana from the air to cast spells. Yes, spells like those from Harry Potter."
TVD/TO: The Original Husband
TV · TheOneAtTheMoon
Loaning money*
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TVD/TO: The Original Husband
TV · TheOneAtTheMoon
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He learned future sight? I thought he only knew normal observation?
Ace was surprised at the sudden move of Hepha. He didn't see the future.
One Piece: Emperor of the Seas
Anime & Comics · Ehnvy
Most fitting one in my opinion, as Roger crew was called Roger Pirates. So like father like son type of thing.
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One Piece: Emperor of the Seas
Anime & Comics · Ehnvy
The appropriate word would be “tyrant” : a cruel and oppressive ruler.
Makoto also knew the minister had likely conspired with the former Prime Minister for personal gain. However, executing all the ministers would set a dangerous precedent and breed fear among future officials. He desired genuine change for the Empire, one that would not label him a dictator. He aimed to establish fairness, justice, and trust, fostering loyalty and collaboration instead of fear and suspicion.
I have become the Child Emperor
Anime & Comics · Support_Five
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original My twilight journey
4.64
A man from our world wakes up in the body of a vampire in the Twilight World. Follow as he shapes the world around him, find a place to fit in and find love.8 Chs 1.7k Coleções
- original
Multiverse adventure ! (Twilight main world)
4.71
This story is a Multiverse Travel story, that will focus mainly on Movies, Books and Tv Series. Worlds 1st : Twilight 2nd: ??? …19 Chs 3.3k Coleções
- original
One Piece: My Wife is Nico Robin
A man from our world goes to sleep, thinking he was having an erotic dream he goes with the situation at hand. Only to realize he had somehow crossed worlds and is now in the body of Nico Robin’s husband. Follow him on his journey as he and his wife join the straw-hats. I do not own, anything related to these characters or the world this is a simple work of fan fiction with no profitable goal. I will not be making any money in any way shape or form from this story.3 Chs 694 Coleções
I would suggest Aphrodite as the love interest, a goddess of love that doesn’t cheat would be a breath of fresh air for once. And it would be a refreshing change from the usual Hestia, Athena trope that keeps repeating itself.
Hades in the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512