Olivia_Wiseman_05

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2021-03-25 Unido Global
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Olivia_Wiseman_05
3 years ago
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love the title but missleading though

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Olivia_Wiseman_05
3 years ago
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keep this and combine it with home sweet hone

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Olivia_Wiseman_05
3 years ago
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take this out

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Olivia_Wiseman_05
3 years ago
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keep*

Olivia_Wiseman_05
Olivia_Wiseman_05
3 years ago
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this is good kepp this pice and combine it with

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Olivia_Wiseman_05
3 years ago
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except this add this to chapter 5

Julio and I haven't been taling that much eversence he kissed me at lunch a few weeks ago. I don't ask him about that.

A Different Life, A Different Story

A Different Life, A Different Story

Teen · Olivia_Wiseman_05

Olivia_Wiseman_05
Olivia_Wiseman_05
3 years ago
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take this entirely out of the book

Olivia_Wiseman_05
Olivia_Wiseman_05
3 years ago
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too much drama already developing in the plot but this could have potential

Olivia_Wiseman_05
Olivia_Wiseman_05
3 years ago
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i like it add it with the yellow house and best buds

Olivia_Wiseman_05
Olivia_Wiseman_05
3 years ago
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take this entire chapter out

  • A Different Life, A Different Story (Edit) original

    A Different Life, A Different Story (Edit)

    Teen

    Indie: "Uh," I take a moment, not to just get in the car, but for what I'm about to say. "I-I'm still scared." "Why?" Uncle Kimmy says. "I miss Tennessee. I miss Cassidy." "Look, Indie, I know it's hard to accept change. Trust me, I even have a hard time accepting change but you gotta adapt. As your Nana said, it's better to learn now, than later." No, no, no, no, no! I try to hold in all the pain and all the tears as thoughts fill my head like a rain of sorrow and despair drown me in the deepest part of the sea. California... Felix: Donnie and I throw rocks at a pond walking home from school. Ever since Diana's mom took custody of the girls, I haven't been seeing them lately. I hope I see them again. I kinda miss them. I miss Maria and I miss how life used to be. Life changes like the vast ocean and her waves of glory and we, life on Earth, have to just live in it and deal with her aptitude whether we like it or not...

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  • A Different Life, A Different Story original

    A Different Life, A Different Story

    Teen

    Indie: "Uh," I take a moment, not to just get in the car, but for what I'm about to say. "I-I'm still scared." "Why?" Uncle Kimmy says. "I miss Tennessee. I miss Cassidy." "Look, Indie, I know it's hard to accept change. Trust me, I even have a hard time accepting change but you gotta adapt. As your Nana said, it's better to learn now, than later." No, no, no, no, no! I try to hold in all the pain and all the tears as thoughts fill my head like a rain of sorrow and despair drown me in the deepest part of the sea. California... Felix: Donnie and I throw rocks at a pond walking home from school. Ever since Diana's mom took custody of the girls, I haven't been seeing them lately. I hope I see them again. I kinda miss them. I miss Maria and I miss how life used to be. Life changes like the vast ocean and her waves of glory and we, life on Earth, have to just live in it and deal with her aptitude whether we like it or not...

    56 Chs 4 Coleções