Idk where you're going with the Danzo stuff but honestly I dig the tension. The writing is good as always but maybe tone back on some of the exposition, or make it more concise. The explanations are important but they get kinda long. Thanks for another chapter :)
POV: You are a Man Utd fan.
AN - I'm sadly a Man Utd Fan too, but since this story has nothing to do with Football. We'll leave the sorry state of my club out of the discussions, Thank You!
Harry Potter: An SI's Story
Book&Literature · WN_LightNovels
...its your story bro, appreciate the heads up even if its not ideal.
Before you start reading, I have to come out with something. I very much admire the story G3 created with his amazing writing skills. However, and this may make some just not read the story anymore, I will be adding elements of romance in this fanfic and maybe R18 scenes for later arcs with the MC and the main cast. Maybe even a 'multi-relationship' (I find the word harem a bit degrading for the females) if I find away not to make it cringe or if it degrades the quality of the fanfic. However, for various reasons, which I will not explain, Nephis isn't included.
Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
feels like I should be used to it now, didnt even take reading it halfway before realising nothing was going to happen. this is a great fic, but man its frustrating.
thanks for the chapter
Really enjoying this, don't put pressure on yourself to cram everything in a couple chapters. Not sure how many plot points you still want to cover, or what they are, but maybe try to hit a couple per chapter? short flashbacks for the more minor plot points could also work.
"The Art Of Seduction And Persuasion. A Shinobi's Way of Information Extraction, Coercion, Seduction, and more! Clearance Level - Chunin."
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
Great chapter. It was nice to see him reveal something, as well as enjoy it. Looking forward to the genin arc, gonna be interesting with the team selection.
Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes