Dude, stop stretching the chapters with constant repetition of the same thing. The last 5 paragraphs are just a collection of synonyms and endless repetition of the same useless stuff. Readers aren't stupid; they got it the first time.
Yes, but still: Nyx as the progenitor of night and Erebus as the progenitor of darkness, they are a perfect match for each other, and the Greeks, apparently, thought so too. At least, where I read, it is described as an ideal union. You might have read something different, as there are many myths and no single definitive one, so I accept your point of view.
"Maybe so, who are we to tell but that thing is still my child and unlike you that actually means something to me." Erebus replied.
PJO: Son of a Primordial
Book&Literature · Joanjudo
It's actually strange that Erebus is his father, considering that Nyx and Erebus are one of the few genuinely loving couples in ancient Greek mythology
"Maybe so, who are we to tell but that thing is still my child and unlike you that actually means something to me." Erebus replied.
PJO: Son of a Primordial
Book&Literature · Joanjudo
I have a pain in my butt
I felt Kai's touch on my belly, lifting me a little off the ground to position his monstrous penis at my anal entrance. The pink head of his cock brushed against my hole as if it was getting ready to slide inside me, I felt a strong pressure that made me moan, if I hadn't been held by those arms I would have lost my balance. When I felt my anus open and expand in different directions, I felt a twinge of pain, but I was so aroused that overcoming the pain meant nothing to me.
Avatar: Third Son of The Fire Lord
Anime & Comics · PRIME_PRIMUS
How should I put it... the author based the main character on Tom Riddle, but it’s not Tom at all. Not even close. The author tries to justify his behavior with the emotions Tom experienced after his rebirth. But understand, while emotions exist, they cannot fundamentally change the essence of a person, their personality. Tom Riddle, as a character, has immense pride and self-love; he is a true narcissist. He didn't particularly like Muggles, loved magic, and was proud to be a wizard. Do you think such a person (even considering he developed emotions) would work as a PE teacher in a Muggle school (even to blend in)? Would such a person talk to Muggles just because he has no one else to talk to? Would such a person want to drive a car or, even worse, a motorcycle? Author, understand, this is not Tom Riddle. I wouldn't even be writing this comment if you had based the character on someone else. But if you chose Tom, at least stick to his character a bit. So far, the main character only has Tom Riddle’s name. If you wanted to change his personality, do it gradually; a person cannot change so quickly, even after death. P.S. Written after reading three chapters.
The author completely trashed the game Hogwarts Legacy. It would be funny if he ended up using the exact same plot as in the game.
Fuck, Naruto is eleven years old and this woman is almost thirty. Tsunami could be sentenced to eight years. I'm so fucking disgusted, I can't believe it. I'll try to pretend the last two chapters don't exist. I won't even read the last one
"From one prison, the main character ended up in another, cool. Author, just admit you’re too lazy to come up with a plot."
I didn't understand at all. Like, everything that distinguishes her from a normal person at first glance is her white skin, some inserts on the joints and... that's all. So where does such discrimination come from? If you touch her, she's firm, the end. But she's a beautiful girl, doesn't require any special care. Either the author made up the problem out of thin air, or I'm an idiot.
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"What? Gonna Cry?"
I became Voldemort
Book&Literature · HornyFBI