hi! will be checking out the book later, does it connected with this book or not?
I'm looking forward to your updates ♥️
your story is really good. the plot is so nice. but you can improve your book by fixing the spelling error and grammar so that readers can understand more. the ending is a bit rush maybe you can change it a little bit, put a situation where yaozhu talk with liya and chap about how their son felt after his parents died in third pov. in that chapter you can tell when yaozhu and liya died and so on. i hope what i commented does not hurt you in any way. this is just my opinion and suggestions, you want to accept it or not, it it is your choice. also can i wish for bonus chapters for yaozhu and liya? pretty please? i need more of their interactions
thank you for the double updates💕
can you do double update? btw your story is awesome!!
looks like the Ah's is making a move 🙄🙄
if he reborn, then can he reborn before she died? it's so sad😭😭
love this😍😍
If you're not feeling well, you should take a break. Your health is really important. Thank you for writing this lovely story 💕
For Our Happier Path
Urban · hansora