shilo_meska

Grammars not bad but can still be improved other then that I hope you start releasing more chapters. I definitely where the story is headed

Are you telling me your the author of “my parasite skill system” and that you got a new Webnovel account? Because this basically an exact copy of it

I love this story concept so much and the wrighting quality is really good. I’m not really an expert on the English language or anything but I didnt notice any misspelled or incorrect words that would decrease the readability. Also vivid words that help visualization and immersion. The story progression so far is decent, bogging down the story by going over what he did every day through the time skips gets rid of unnecessary info that can slow down the story and make it less enjoyable too read. Another aspect that f the story I absolutely adore is the structure of the world.how the fables die when forgotten and how the have their own separate world. Usually I find it difficult to get into a system novel because they rarely ever touch upon how the Mc is getting stronger just from killing thing. Where is the system getting all that power too give it too the mc. the system in this novel from what I interpreted is mostly administrative in nature. As in they don’t don’t get their power from the system, the system just helps them focus and understand thier power. I love this novel and I sincerely hope it continues. Last but not least: cute and innocent little elves brutalizing people while smiling and giggling😂😂😂 gotta love that.