DaoistAkYbTe

The grammar is so bad that it’s hard to continue reading the book. It could have been a good book but it’s hard to understand what is happening due to horrible writing and grammar.

This book is different and could have been great except that the chapters are sometimes mixed up and it skipped parts. It’s almost like chapters are missing. The worst part is that the book cut off suddenly and even though it says the book is complete, it’s not. I feel like I wasted my time cause I don’t know how it will end.

I couldn’t even finish reading the first chapter as the grammar is so bad.

Really enjoying this book and the story is different. I just wish that the story gets updated regularly and I don’t have to keep waiting. Please update!!!

The ending is such a cliffhanger and seems incomplete. It’s was so disappointed with the ending. I really wanted to know what happens to the main characters.

This book is incomplete!!! I was so disappointed when I realized that the ending was not real. Not worth reading as it’s incomplete.

Well written book and storyline was interesting. They only they was that there were so many plot lines and towards the end it seemed very rushed and things didn’t get wrapped up as well as it could have. This book seemed like it needed more chapters so that some of the plot lines could be ended better. Other than that I think the book was well written.

I couldn’t keep reading this as the translation is really bad. The names kept changing and there was a lot of grammar errors.