Well here is my personal opinion. I find you novel engaging and will continue reading as I would like to see how the main characters progress and see where this story goes from here. This novel is good. Keep it up.
What about school? Is this the weekend? Is there a delay between orientation and the actual 1st day of class?
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Fantasy · NF_Stories
How about “The journey continues.”
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Fantasy · NF_Stories
This is actually the afternoon of the following day. Not the same day.
Having her confession rejected that morning and now encountering the person concerned left her feeling awkward.
Urban · Blue bird alone in the clear sky
Sorry little man but your bound for Epstein island.
Am I going to be sold to some weird Rich Lady Island next?
Games · Kaka number three
Hard to get fired when you were never hired.
"Mom and Dad, isn't it about time you tell me what's going on? Are you two teaming up to bamboozle me? It's really unnecessary. So what if the company fired me? If they don't want me, it's their loss. Work can always be found."
Urban · The Voice of the Cat
Third prince, not second. Also he should not even be there with the second prince leading rescue squads and student council. Hope this fool gets his eaten.
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Dagger mastery should be upgraded to dagger resonance. Becoming one with his daggers. Maybe adding stages to resonance 1-4.
[Ding, due to numerous uses in a short amount of time, dagger mastery has upgraded into dagger rush.]
Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
He did not add any points to AP. Was 600 before the add and is still at 600. So there should be 3 points left to add.
[Attribute points: 0]
Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
Please stop with the over explanations. We your readers do not require such deep and repeated explanations of skills and traits. This is just my opinion and not really worth the time to type or even read. But, it really is annoying.
Evolving My Undead Legion In A Game-Like World
Games · _Drakon