Just a casual writer. Hope you enjoy my stories!
Author of Cosmic Creator.
2020-12-13 UnidoGlobal
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Judai
3 years ago
Replied to BreezyNovels
Sad to see you go, but based on your paragraph comments I can see you're over analyzing. Not only is Jay just an 18-year-old kid who was made into a LITERAL GOD, but he's still trying to figure out what it all means. When we apply real world thinking like you have (which I encourage obviously, it's a major aspect of any novel) we get too wrapped up on the book itself. You're leaving out the fact that he doesn't know ANYTHING. His whole inspiration is to become whatever God means to him, disregarding (mostly) what he knew about the Christian/Catholic "God" from Earth. This is a fun, but equally important, duty for him to carry out. And only through trial and error can he learn what exactly being a Cosmic Entity means to him. This next part isn't meant to sound mean either, as I apply it to everyone, including myself, when I say that if we were put in Jay's position we'd be just as lost as him. Sure, we've read books about this type of situation, but nothing prepares us to ACTUALLY live it, meaning our critiques are just nitpicks that would be totally baseless if we filled Jay's shoes.
Venus' mouth slightly opened and her eyes round like flying saucers. "Jay, that was...amazing." She was stunned that I made such a mature statement given my human age and poor understanding of the universe.
Thanks for the support man I appreciate it more than you know! There will be a lot of focus on creating depth to the worlds and characters in the story, so expect to meet many more gods, mortals, entities, and beings that peak your interest :)
I'm glad you can see the intent in my writing so thanks for that lol. Kravish is definitely one of favorite characters in the story though, even after we branch out past Earth. You can look forward to seeing more of him in the future my friend!
Jay Thomas was your typical high school boy obsessed with sports, video games, and girls. He has his whole life planned out ahead of him after graduating from high school, or at least he did until having a fateful encounter with God.
During the summer between his junior and senior year Jay was confronted by a strange voice in his head that asked him to become the first ever “Cosmic Entity.” At first Jay thought he was going crazy, but soon he learned just how real the voice in his head was.
Overnight Jay’s world was flipped inside out after being turned into an immortal and becoming the Infinity Plane’s first Cosmic Entity. Now he’s tasked with creating entire universes and managing over existence itself!
Cosmic entities!
The Infinity Plane!
World Games!
A world where imagination and creativity are the only limits! Kind of...
Join Jay as he enters an entirely new world of...well, world creation! What are World Games? Will Jay become the most powerful Cosmic Entity of all? And is it okay to make it rain dogs on Sundays? Honestly? Only time will tell.
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Important things to know for this series:
This story is told through our main character's perspective, however, the setting and lens of the story changes frequently to see what's going on throughout his universes.
You will experience various adventures, cultures, civilizations, wars, and story-lines throughout the entire book.
I'm always willing to take new ideas or answer questions about the book, so feel free to leave a comment and let me hear your thoughts!
It's important to note that this book is inspired by karami92’s World Keeper.
Sad to see you go, but based on your paragraph comments I can see you're over analyzing. Not only is Jay just an 18-year-old kid who was made into a LITERAL GOD, but he's still trying to figure out what it all means. When we apply real world thinking like you have (which I encourage obviously, it's a major aspect of any novel) we get too wrapped up on the book itself. You're leaving out the fact that he doesn't know ANYTHING. His whole inspiration is to become whatever God means to him, disregarding (mostly) what he knew about the Christian/Catholic "God" from Earth. This is a fun, but equally important, duty for him to carry out. And only through trial and error can he learn what exactly being a Cosmic Entity means to him. This next part isn't meant to sound mean either, as I apply it to everyone, including myself, when I say that if we were put in Jay's position we'd be just as lost as him. Sure, we've read books about this type of situation, but nothing prepares us to ACTUALLY live it, meaning our critiques are just nitpicks that would be totally baseless if we filled Jay's shoes.
Venus' mouth slightly opened and her eyes round like flying saucers. "Jay, that was...amazing." She was stunned that I made such a mature statement given my human age and poor understanding of the universe.
Cosmic Creator
Fantasy · Judai