Trouble_13

Trouble_13

male LV 15
2020-12-05 Unido United States
Emblemas 14

Moments 6
Trouble_13
Trouble_13
8 months ago
Posted

Even though it’s a mid overall the story is pretty good to me, it just needs more depth but I’ll change my review when it gets better in the future

Trouble_13
Trouble_13
9 months ago
Posted

This shit got me so mad.ahahahahahahahahhahahah

Trouble_13
Trouble_13
1 years ago
Replied to Derpy_Bird

What’s Ao3? If you don’t mind me asking.

Trouble_13
Trouble_13
2 years ago
Commented

I hope you keep it up it was really good and I hope you keep the idea going

Trouble_13
Trouble_13
2 years ago
Posted

Are you kidding me he was locked up for ten years then he becomes a slave for them to pay back his debts it’s stupid you could’ve did it differently but you did this shit.

Trouble_13
Trouble_13
3 years ago
Posted

It’s overall good, but i feel that the chapters are short, story development is slow, and I’m not talking about cultivation but the general story of development.