Mor1

Mor1

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2020-11-28 Unido Philippines
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Mor1
Mor1
2 years ago
Posted

the character (mc) can only be described as bland there's nothing interesting about him and the thing that would have made him unique is getting chloe's power but turns out he's not getting it (mb on that part as i didn't understand ch 1 properly) and the only thing that kept me reading was wanting to see how the author will incorporate her powers into the world of SDS (even if nerfed it would have been fine), as for the interactions between the characters it's average at best not really great not bad either, as for the pacing as of rn (ch 10) it is awful it's like the author is trying to speedrun SDS any% as for world background... ik it's SDS but come on the mc literally got dropped into SDS get's hired then 2 yr timeskip and he's suddenly fighting on the same level as meliodas and the other sds like wtf author couldn't you have expanded the world background and have the mc dropped off at a much earlier time somewhere around the world where could have gotten training before joining meliodas that way atleast his power doesn't feel like an asspull. In summary this fic is MID(average) af.

Mor1
Mor1
2 years ago
Replied to Unusual_Hilichurl

will you make a discord server for this fic?

Mor1
Mor1
2 years ago
Replied to Changen4125

based on your description he sounds like someone that would get interested in 'to your eternity' (hopefully the author also includes it in the story someday)

Mor1
Mor1
2 years ago
Commented

why does she need the cape to restore stamina? demons have infinite stamina .-.

I was running habitually for more than a day, because with the sunrise Madjed's Cape began to restore my stamina at a double rate. Having finished my chat, I decided to take a break, after which I was seized by the desire to become stronger, because as soon as Hashira appeared, I ran away in fear.

Nitocris Hashibira (a demon slayer story about a demon)

Nitocris Hashibira (a demon slayer story about a demon)

Anime & Comics · Undead_Corpse

Mor1
Mor1
2 years ago
Commented

the mc is basically just paul in the show pokemon: diamond and pearl

"Well, he asked for this kind of battle. I'm not like those young kids waiting in the Route's. I'm a trainer, I train and utilize my Pokémon's ability and potential. I'm not a daycare, I don't sit and watch them, I'm the guide and the master."

Pokémon: Dark Legacy

Pokémon: Dark Legacy

Anime & Comics · peanutcoffee

Mor1
Mor1
2 years ago
Posted

good story imo but the time it takes to update is shit ..................................................................................................................................................

Mor1
Mor1
2 years ago
Replied to TyrantTron335

Paradox is the first author also this guy DaoofEternity is just some pest that got banned from the original author's discord server because he was being annoying

Mor1
Mor1
2 years ago
Replied to TyrantTron335

this guy copied path to power don't support him the original author is Paradox who is currently rewriting the earlier chapters of the story

Mor1
Mor1
2 years ago
Replied to Xequalcross

yes, this one is copied I've been following the original author way before the hiatus and im in his discord server so don't support or believe this guy saying that this is his story, I already reported him

Mor1
Mor1
2 years ago
Posted

this one is copied the original author Paradox is currently rewriting the early parts of the fic so don't believe DaoOfEternity this guy does not own One Piece: Path to Power also this guy got banned from the original author's server for being a pest

  • Demon Slayer: New Moon original

    Demon Slayer: New Moon

    Anime & Comics ACTION VILLAIN DEVIL DEMON SLAYER

    A teen who’s parents are killed by their rivals is forced to take over his family’s business both their legal and underworld business as Arata over the years as Arata runs the business it became more successful and eventually he takes his revenge against the people who killed his parents however as the 2 sides fight he is killed by one of his subordinates that turned out to be a spy that belonged to another competitor as he lines up for reincarnation something unexpected happens… P.S I’m doing this for fun and practice also I’m new to writing stories so don’t expect anything too high although I will try as best as I can to make the story readable I do not own any of the characters except my OC

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