_LucXy

_LucXy

male LV 2

Just sombody who likes Games, Anime, Manga, and Light Novels.

2020-11-24 Unido United States
Atividade
Obras originais
Emblemas 6

Moments 9
_LucXy
_LucXy
3 years ago
Replied to Darian

oops The Original Stats used to be in the 100's, but then the Stats didn't make sense, so I changed it to the 1000's. I missed that, so thanks for pointing it out.

_LucXy
_LucXy
3 years ago
Replied to Darian

Truth be told, I had NO SCRIPT I made this story straight from my head, and I didn't reread everything before I posted it because I was new to this. Still kind of am. There will be some Weird and Broken things that don't make sense, but I'm working on it. This is still the [Rough Version], which will work as a "Template" of sorts when I fix everything and actually (Probably) male a Script. Thank you for Reading, as well as letting me know your Ideas. I hope you can continue to give me Feedback and point out things that can be Changed.

_LucXy
_LucXy
3 years ago
Replied to Gulth

Thanks for pointing this out. It was actually originally 100 Starting Stat Points, but then I realized that it didn't make much sense. I changed it to 1000 Points, since it would seem more Logical with the Story. I might still need to fix some things, so not everything will seem Wack and Weird. Thank You again.

_LucXy
_LucXy
4 years ago
Replied to Paladium

No Prob. :3 If you have any "Skills" that you want in the game, then send me a list or something. Thank You :D

_LucXy
_LucXy
4 years ago
Replied to Paladium

No Problem :) There will still need to be a LOT of improvement in the future though, so don't hesitate to throw criticism my way ;)

_LucXy
_LucXy
4 years ago
Replied to yokedjaguar

I see what you mean. To be honest, I have little to no idea what I'm doing, since this is my first time writing a story. I am using this story as more of a "Template" for when, or if I make a better version of it. I also agree that the "Bully" aesthetic is extremely overused. And about the "Real World" and "VR" Parts of the story, there will always be more of that to come, but sorry nonetheless. I guess I did add a bit too many parts that didn't follow the "VR" Theme of my story. And about the Info, I guess I do seem to overhaul on a lot of it. I'll try to see what I could do about it. Thank you for the honest review, and I hope that you can point out some more things that seem "Over the top".

_LucXy
_LucXy
4 years ago
Replied to richonisy

I feel you there. Instead of [Power Up = Consumption Up] I'm making it so that the "Effects" of a Skill/Spell will increase, while the "Consumption" stays the same, or even decreases. So with this, no more losing MP for more Strength :D Also, Spells might come later, so look forward to that :3

_LucXy
_LucXy
4 years ago
Replied to Taiga_Inari

Why thank you :)

_LucXy
_LucXy
4 years ago
Replied to Taiga_Inari

Thank you fot the comment. I'm a beginner at this, so I'm just wtiring what I think feels right to me. So going down the list, 1 : I actually forgot to put something for the outside world that would memtion the game, so sorry for that. 2 : I didn't mention players, but they're there. Sorry for the little to no interaction or esthetic of players from the game. 3 : The Stats do seem weird, don't they? I'll see if I can fix that at some point. The HP System will probably be something like "Creatures have a damage range that decreases if the player has more Defence". So the Damage will be based off of the opponent instead of some random system. The Defence will just be simple subtraction of Dmg-Def=HpLoss. 4 : Adults. I really need to think more about the overall situation of things, and not just the main focus. Sorry about that. 5 : I'm using the App, but my Authors Notes wouldn't save, so I'm probably gonna see if I can fix that. With that done, I apologize for my lack of background knowledge. Thank you for the Feedback, and please tell me if there are other parts that could use some fixing. I might try to make a Polished Version on Paper, then Release it when I find none of the problems that I see here. Thank You!

  • Mask Holder original

    Mask Holder

    Fantasy

    A Mask can hold Great Power. Wear it for too long, and you lose oneself. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - No Name, No Objective, and No Escape. There is a boy who travels between [Veils], sometimes appearing in already occupied Spaces. When he appears, the [Shadow] is immediately taken care of with his Blade, and the [Masks] are left with nothing to do. When faced with greater threats, the boy will begin to use 2 Weapons. One of which is a Sword as Black as Space, and a Gun as White as the Moon. When both weapons are in play, every enemy is dealt with swiftly, and flawlessly. There is a downside to his appearance, however. When he defeats the [Shadow], the [Shard] is taken by him without a single word. Nobody knows who he is, or if he is Human. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Bright Light floods his vision as he opens his eyes. Not knowing where he is, he wanders the Plains, aimlessly roaming, and looking for Signs of Life. As he wandered, he found a Little Girl who was "Training" with a Wooden Stick. Not being able to bear her terrible swordsmanship, he walks up to her, and draws his blade. The Girl, frightened and confused, began to fight him. As the days went by, her Swordsmanship grew steadily. As "He" taught her his Sword Technique, he continued to eliminate [Shadows]. This is the Story of a Mysterious Boy who has finally escaped the Ropes that tied him down, and into a New World that he had yet to explore.

    16 Chs 2 Coleções

  • Would you like to Continue? original

    Would you like to Continue?

    Fantasy ADVENTURE SYSTEM COMEDY SUMMONS

    (Basic Summary at the Bottom) Note : This Story progresses quite quickly. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - So... Different World Scenario. A Random Shut-In who reads nothing but the Isekai Genre gets Summoned to another world. Laying on the floor with his eyes closed, the "Hero", Quintz Kritan, was Summoned before the King. Without a second thought, he immediately opened his [Status] as if it was second nature. Looking over it, he only had 4 Skills : [x10 Exp] {Hero Exclusive} [x5 Skill Points] {Hero Exclusive} [x5 Stat Points] {Hero Exclusive} [Player's Decision] {God's Gift} Finally getting up, the King greets him, and tasked him with defeating the Demon King, as well as defeat all of the Demon Lords that reside within the Dungeons. "That sounds pretty cool. Alright..." As everybody applauded, Quintz raised his hand. "I refuse!" With an immediate stop, the King questioned the Hero. "I refuse! I would rather live life without any effort!" In a rage, the King ordered his Knights. Quin was Executed. . . . . . . . . . [Would you like to Continue?] ... The hell? Half joking, he accepts. Waking up in another Room, he found himself burning alive. Screaming from unbearable pain, he suffered greatly... until... [Would you like to acquire Skills [Fire Immunity] and [Pain Immunity]?] Unable to think properly, he accepts. Immediately, the pain went away, and his body no longer burned. However, he still died from the earlier burns. [Would you like to Continue?] ... What is this? Waking up again, he found himself drifting in the Open Ocean. "God damn it... Well, it can't get any worse than this... right?" - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Summary: Quintz is Summoned to Another World. Refusing the King's Demand, he is Executed. Due to his Skill, [Player's Decision], he revived himself Twice, and drifts off into unknown territory.

    13 Chs 11 Coleções

  • Sors Mea Online (SMO)
[Rough Version] original

    Sors Mea Online (SMO) [Rough Version]

    Games ADVENTURE SYSTEM COMEDY SLICEOFLIFE

    (The Cover and Story are in the "Early Stages", so this will be a "Template" of sorts for a possible future "Polished" version) Are you interested in the World that you currently live in? Do you love the way that the Animals live, and the way that the Atmosphere is slowly being tainted? Cool, then this might not be for you. This revolves around the Full Dive VR Game of "Sors Mea Online", or SMO. With the Advancements in Technology, Games have gone a Step Up in the world, and can now be experienced in 1st Person. SMO, however, was but a Step Higher than the rest. Made by One Person, who goes by the Nickname "LucXy" (Luck-z-y), the world has gone from Silence to an Uproar after they saw the advanced mechanics and AI in SMO. With over 30 Years in Development, it was finally released, with No Beta, No Alpha, and absolutely No Pay-to-Win Features involved. What was once thought to be a Lame game created by a Nobody Developer, was later all over the World. Nearly Every person on the Planet has heard of Sors Mea Online, and a bit over Half of the Earths Population played SMO. (By the way, the world of SMO is around 2x bigger that Earth) The words "Sors Mea" translate from Latin to "My Fate". So "My Fate" Online, was, in the Literal sense, "A Game where you can become Practically Anything." Farmer? Cultivation Skills Exist. Swordsman? Attack Skills Exist. Babysitter?! Buy some Land and build a Daycare or an Orphanage. When the acronym "NPC" is heard, you would usually think, Simple, Bland, and Repetitive. However, in this world, what some players only see as Lines of Code, many others see them as Nearly Human. With the Human-Like NPC's, the People of SMO live like normal. Farming, Building, Studying, Learning, Training, and even learning Skills or Magic. Like the Real World, the People of SMO can Feel Emotions, have Memories, Feel Pain and Delight, and even have Children, with both NPC or Player. Yup, players can raise a Virtual Family that feels too real to be fake. With the many types of Skills, Magics, Weapons, Items, and Creatures in this world, there are practically no such thing as having nothing to do. Craft, Train Skills, learn Magic, conquer Dungeons, or just Have a Shop, or Raise a Family, be an Adventurer and see new lands, fight Monsters, and be wary of the Unknown. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Now the Story of SMO will revolve around an 18 Year old Kid who discovers a FDVR Headset by Accident while he, like any Cliche, was running from some of his Bullies that have been with him since Kindergarten. Upon Logging In to a New Account, he sets a Username : LacX. (Lack-z) When he logs into the game, he is told to allocate 100 Stat Points, and choose 1 Unique Skill, and 3 Normal Skills, as well as a Weapon. Since he doesn't like to fight very much, he decided to just let his Speed do the work, and put every Stat Point into Agility. When he finally steps into the starting Town, he is Immediately hit with a Message : {Acquired New Skills} With these New Skills, he was Immediately shocked at how fast he can really move with 1000 Agility. As he Levels Up, he starts to get a bit into Smithing and Jewel Cutting. With his new found Skills and his rediculous Speed, he will attempt to climb to the Top of the Central Tower, also known as The World's Greed. What's in the Tower? I don't know. Who is the Developer of SMO? Maybe save some questions for Later. How OP of an MC are we talking about? Read it, and maybe you'll find out. Other than that, there will be many other attributes to the Story, like Heroines, some cool Equipment, a Child, and many more Aspects of SMO. {MC Character Sheet} [Name : Suuco Tsukuyomi] [Age : 18 B-Day : Oct. 1] [Gender : Male] [SMO User : LacX] [Unique Skill : Copy] [Stats] {Level : 1} {0/100 Exp} {Str :1} : Physical Damage {End : 1} : Defence {Agi :1001} : Overall Speed {Sta : 1} : Used for Active Skills {Mag : 1} : Spell Strength {Wis : 1} : Mana

    38 Chs 31 Coleções