Anonny_Anonymous

The MC should create Iron Man (spider themed) suits that can be operated remotely by his AI. Then, he can be in two places at once to throw people off. I’m not opposed to Bruce knowing the MC is Spider-Man because if he reveals anything, you can just tell everyone he’s Batman. Mutually Assured Destruction. But you need alibis. Regularly being seen when Spider-Man is acting elsewhere in the city or even being seen in the same vicinity right next to each other (e.g. a fundraiser is held up and Spider-Man rescues the MC) can create a paper trail showing the MC is not Spider-Man.

Jiraiya can spam toads (converting entire buildings into the stomach of the mountain toad or summoning a giant toad to crush his enemies), Orochimaru can spam endless snakes (10,000 snakes attack), Kisame can spam sharks (literally thousands of them), Nagato can summon a bunch of creatures with varied abilities with no shared theme (one hellhound looking dog can split infinitely as you cut them in half, one can turn invisible, one can fly, etc. and they’re all different types of animals), one guy has a giant chameleon that can turn into a castle, Hanzo has a giant salamander with deadly poison, Temari has a weasel, Danzo has a floating elephant that has this inhaling wind attack, etc. Why can’t the MC just use his shinigamis and call it his shadow summons from the shadow realm? He can claim to have tried the summoning jutsu without a contract and getting reverse summoned to the shadow realm and signed a contract. Jiraiya did that to get to Mount Myoboku. Who could argue with this story? If they ask for the contract, tell them the shadow realm sage refused to grant a scroll for the contract unless you they can beat Mahoraga, the final boss of the shadow realm. Bam. Your dilemma is solved. Start using your shinigamis.

Can you please change “Haking” to “Hawking” throughout the fic?

He should use the time ship to travel through time collecting all the most powerful artifacts in Marvel.

The Ka Stone is displayed on his head? Is there a reason it has to be there? All you need is someone to target it magically or via something like Pym Particles or phasing through you to grab it. Why make a big shining target? You should implant it in your body.

Steven Haking? Throughout the entire chapter, you’ve spelled it that way. Do you mean Steven Hawking? He also died in 2018 and given your background information, that seems to match.

These Chinese names are so annoying.

All the Chinese names are annoying. This is a Japanese fic.

This MC is so dumb. Why is he making super soldiers!?

This MC is an idiot. Why would he give his blood at all?