Ayoo??🧐🧐
Yet, Melvin allowed Nial to do whatever he pleased, and only half an hour later, he was done bathing. Nial couldn't believe that Melvin had hit such a low point in life in a matter of days that he even let his friend wash and bathe him like a puppy.
Odyssey of the Blind God
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Of course it is a simple thing and i Get it, but in my opinion it should atleast be «joeng-hui said» or something with his name at The start of a paragraph, then it is fine to use «he» When u have stated properly who is talking. Sometimes it will be «sol was freaking out» then jump to next paragraph and it will be «this enemy is really tough he thought» or something in this fashion and it actually refering to mc and not sol. Great book though, still reading and story is progressing nicely
Great story so far, only complaint is main characters perspective is written as “he” and it gets very confusing in fights and conversations to understand who is doing/saying what. As of chapter 86 into it
Interesting plot, however it is a very slow story and the mc has no personality as of 84 chaps in. His whole character is ppl pitying him and him trying to find his family. No thought prosess behind things except reaching that goal. feels very bland with no info on The world and The mc is written as a dumbass
Odyssey of the Blind God
Fantasy · HideousGrain