Having read the story first in another place I can safely say this story is very well written, The story progression feels well thought out and doesn’t drag things out unnecessarily. The story gets frequent updates and has canon-related side stories voted on weekly, adding depth to the story, the side stories won’t be posted here but you can easily find them in the places mentioned in the synopsis. The writing quality is very high, in all the time i’ve have been reading the story I haven’t noticed any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors, all the chapters flow well and feel like they add something to the story. The characters in this story are all very well written, I would say it is this stories strongest point. Every significant character we meet has a well thought out personality, meshing well with other characters and playing off of each other. The world this fanfic is set in would count as a Minor AU, the vast majority of important things are the same as in canon but there are a few changes to the world that form the baseline of the story, you will very quickly figure out what some of them are from just reading chapter 1. As the story progresses and we learn more about the world, it adds a sense of firmness to the world, making it feel bustling and alive instead of an unseen background used solely to progress the plot. Overall I give this story a very strong 5 stars and highly recommend it.
Thanks for the chapter
The Naruto universe does have super fast regeneration, Tsunade has it and so do all of the Jinchuriki.
At base proficiency, the Sleeping Skill increases the ease of getting to sleep, and shrinks the amount of sleep needed for a restore. You now awaken from a full rest with a reset state, meaning injuries, and debuffs, are removed upon waking no matter how severe.
Sakura Haruno The Gaming Addict, And Her Gamified Life [Naruto]
Anime & Comics · Sendicard
How about a genjutsu that makes use of Ninshu at it’s core. Ninshu connects people using chakra so he could make a Genjutsu similar to The Infinite Tsukuyomi, creating an artificial world and reinforcing it with Ninshu, having the people trapped inside of it all contribute chakra towards reinforcing the genjutsu. The genjutsu could even adapt based on the people trapped inside of it, using their own experiences of how the world works to subtly alter the illusion making it even more realistic. It is similar in concept to the theoretical genjutsu in this chapter but using a different medium. Instead of sound it is proximity and the problem with keeping the genjutsu active is fixed by using the chakra of the people trapped in it, possibly using some kind of external chakra storage they all contribute to, so the control required for it is sidestepped
It really is, there is nothing that Ulfric can do at this point that will turn the tides so the rebellion is over, even if they haven’t completely won yet.
"The rebellion... is done." I proclaim wistfully, startling many of the men and women unsubtly listening in "I just hope it was fucking worth it."
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
Wa wa, something that happens in real life also happened in a story but because I only like stories where the main character is an untouchable god this is completely unacceptable and I will compain about it.
Suddenly I felt my foot slip on a pool of blood, and for the briefest of moments my guard slipped with it. I almost sighed with resignation as the burned fist sailed for my face, no doubt about to cause me a whole lot of pain... only to suddenly stop as a sword of golden moonstone slipped under his armpit.
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
“Just Nord Warriors”… there is no such thing as “just a nord warrior”. Nords are the most ridiculous race in tamriel. They live at the conceptual centre of creation and will fight to the death for glory and honour and that’s not even mentioning that Nord’s are the ones who invented words in Dovahzul to make dragons experience Mortality and then banished an actual god into the future using a scroll formed at the start of creation
My muscles burned under the onslaught, even as a wall of both wind and flame skinned him alive, and my bones creaked even as the berserker was almost drained of blood by the dagger jutting out of his thigh.
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
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original MHA: Reborn with Psychokinesis
After dying, a woman wakes up in a new body and with a new family in a world filled with superpowers. Cover is by EDIPTUS on DeviantArt2 Chs 237 Coleções
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The Dungeon Core of Glimmerhallow
The story of a man reborn as a Dungeon Core. Watch as he grows from a newborn dungeon into a fully fledged dungeon, meeting a variety of characters along the way eventually growing powerful enough to not have to worry about his own safety.2 Chs 7 Coleções
I say yes because Toga and Mei will actually work well together instead of being against each other the whole time
1. Yes, add Toga and make it a love triangle.
In My Hero Academia with a Jujutsu Kaisen Gacha System
Anime & Comics · GAF_00_TW