Indeed I was thinking along those lines but I wanted to truly portray the thought of "What if the world is faced with unprecedented crisis? Where everyone experiences true fear? Its basically working on natural human instinct to group up." But ... I felt like it was really hard to portray. Thank you, your comments really help.
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Sci-fi · Roji_Nemuro
Thank you ... and yes , I am still trying to learn the usage of punctuation marks in stories. Thank you once again, I really appreciate it.
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Sci-fi · Roji_Nemuro
Yes ... as you noticed I made Dr. Estes the type to be cool headed character. I'm doing my best to give the feeling that"Ah this guy is a scientist but human at the same time". Its probably because of how I want a scientist to be. But I will take note of that. Ill surely be mindful about it :) Thank you so much, Your comment makes me happy :)
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Sci-fi · Roji_Nemuro
Oh thank you. In the later part of the stories I tried removing the "it was" it does become weird and annoyingly long. really, thank you!!
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Into Ruins
Sci-fi · Roji_Nemuro
I made it that obvious huh ahahah. This is my first story but I do hope you're enjoying it. Although, I kinda diverge from the path but you're not that far.
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Into Ruins
Sci-fi · Roji_Nemuro
hahahah dun mind it xD
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Into Ruins
Sci-fi · Roji_Nemuro
Take care. I'll be waiting for newer chapters :)
Ah sorry, I did not notice the last update of the chapter. Are there more? When will you release the next one?
I've always been a fan of stories like this. Your writing is great! You update too! My problems are the characters in the story. I can't seem to grasp their personality at the moment. But I've also read novels where characters are like that, they become solid and powerful figures in the later parts. And I wish to see this novel grow like that. You just earned another reader ^^. I wish I was as good and consistent as you.
I am confused. Can you give me some examples? Sorry. I suck at this. But, Ill keep trying! Thank you!
Into Ruins
Sci-fi · Roji_Nemuro