isn't lee Jordan in the twins year?
the author has a decent idea but he drags everything out for so long it becomes boring because most if the chapters im just skimming through. Also theres too many grammar problems or just weirdly written sentences it ruins the story. im nearly on chapter 50 and so far we know almost nothing about the mc and his strength and the author just says he'll explain more in the future but after almost 50 chapters we shouldve already known a lot more of the mc but 90% of the chapters are based on the golden trio, so if you want to read a story where the mc barely does anything and the plot is extremely slow then this is for you but if you want to see a troy where the mc actually changes the plot and uses it to his advantage then this isnt for you.
will he do any other bloodmagic like rituals to make him or his dragon stronger?
will you make him swap eyes with fugaku so they both get ems? also you should make itachi focus on something else aswell not just genjutsu.
+1
Shortly after the Doom
TV · Jasonenrick
will you ever start updating this again?
its a good chapter i cant think of anything wrong with it tbh
AN: This chapter was pretty hard to write and I kinda did it in a hurry. I don't think it came up exactly like I wanted to, but I hope you like it anyway. I might end up rewriting it based on your feedback (don't worry, I won't make any serious edits without telling you), so please tell me what you think of it and if you have any suggestions.
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
+1
2. A story in the Harry Potter franchise.
House of the Dragon: Stars of the Realm.
TV · Evilmoon