Author have you read Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor? Also thank's for the chapter!
Lol its fine, I like doing this, if I can help an author with grammar it makes the story better. Leading to a good reading experience for myself lol.
I'll make a Google doc later and use this chapter as an example and show the changes I would make and why.
Didn't see what coming?
Thanks for the chapter. I have to ask. Are the last few chapter unedited? Because the grammar got worse again.
Cool.
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The Sovereign of True Immortality
Eastern · Nansha
Divinity? Do you mean Divination?
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Eastern · Nansha
It's incomparable from all previous chapters. This chapter flows without amy interruption at all really. Hopefully you as the author agrees, like if you read the last chapter and this chapter and compared, then I'm pretty sure you would agree. Thank you!
I hope the grammar this time is fairly good. :>
The Sovereign of True Immortality
Eastern · Nansha
Wang Wei would agree...
Fate is the strongest Dao. It controls the myriad Dao, the restraint of All, and the limiter of Destiny and Divinity. It started the strongest and remains the strongest.
The Sovereign of True Immortality
Eastern · Nansha
Oh yeah, I did the chapter on a google doc. Do I have any way to send it to you?
The Sovereign of True Immortality
Eastern · Nansha