How did you not realise that you changed pronouns from masculine to feminine? Really screwed up this chapter
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I see. Many thanks for this. I'll keep my fingers crossed in anticipation of the chapters released daily.
Really good story, but just like some have pointed out, 'half giants' suddenly replaced 'half trolls' that we've been used to. There's also continuous misplacement of pronouns, as evident in previous chapters; which makes for tiresome reading. Kindly look into it, please. Thank you
The First Vampire
Fantasy · Carrot On Weighing Scale