Daoist2NRJe8

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2022-05-13 Unido Global
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Daoist2NRJe8
Daoist2NRJe8
5 months ago
Commented

Really good story, but just like some have pointed out, 'half giants' suddenly replaced 'half trolls' that we've been used to. There's also continuous misplacement of pronouns, as evident in previous chapters; which makes for tiresome reading. Kindly look into it, please. Thank you

Daoist2NRJe8
Daoist2NRJe8
11 months ago
Commented

How did you not realise that you changed pronouns from masculine to feminine? Really screwed up this chapter

Daoist2NRJe8
Daoist2NRJe8
1 years ago
Replied to FATED_DESTINY

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Daoist2NRJe8
Daoist2NRJe8
1 years ago
Replied to FATED_DESTINY

I see. Many thanks for this. I'll keep my fingers crossed in anticipation of the chapters released daily.