Lucas_Coimbra

Lucas_Coimbra

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2020-09-02 Unido Brazil
Emblemas 5

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Lucas_Coimbra
12 days ago
Commented

Did he go on a mission in another universe, while already being on a mission in another universe? At this point I think you've already forgotten about the original universe, since the characters in the second universe have had much more development, this is getting messy and breaks the immersion with the story.

Lucas_Coimbra
Lucas_Coimbra
12 days ago
Commented

Did he go on a mission in another universe, while already being on a mission in another universe? At this point I think you've already forgotten about the original universe, since the characters in the second universe have had much more development, this is getting messy and breaks the immersion with the story.

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Lucas_Coimbra
13 days ago
Commented

AI is strong in this one

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Lucas_Coimbra
21 days ago
Replied to Ambrose_Allen

WTF?

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Lucas_Coimbra
22 days ago
Replied to orangegummy

Well, the author wants to follow Tolkien's main story, with as few changes as possible, so it's normal that he and the system are very weak, I like the story, but so far it seems that the presence of the MC only made it worse/didn't make any difference to the story, as if his existence was completely dispensable, which is kind of the opposite of what I like, fanfics in which the MC appears and changes the story and makes himself present, so I'm stopping here. This is still one of the best LOTR fanfics, only the direction of the story is discouraging at times.

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Lucas_Coimbra
28 days ago
Commented

Chinese...