Lucas_Coimbra

Is this done by AI? Also, why would Batman directly go into confrontation with the MC when he hasn't done anything except knock out 3 bad guys, which is what happened with Doomsday, one moment he's in the middle of a destroyed city, the next he's wandering around normally like nothing happened.

Is this fanfic going to have yaoi? Dude, didn't you think about putting that in the description or in a tag?

Krl

I don't remember if it was like this in the other chapters, but this one has a very noticeable AI influence. The writing is unmistakable.

Raynare is on the same level as the others, Mc can also fly extremely fast, wouldn't it be simple to catch up to her?

From what I understood from the chapter, the Mc is the person who was born and raised in "DxD", the other person, probably his past life, died, definitely, but his memories were passed to the Mc on his 18th birthday, without any attachment or feelings, being then considered a stranger by the Mc. It's not my favorite, I prefer when the Mc dies and transmigrates, keeping his past "identity", in this situation he just died and that's it. His memories were just used for someone else's benefit.

This is normal, many Chinese fanfics start with large chapters, usually decreasing after chapter 50.

Again?

the idea is very good, but the AI, as always, ends up ruining the story with its boring and tedious way of writing, this makes the story artificial and repetitive at some points, with the conversation being unrealistic with the situation.