patrick_john_yu

patrick_john_yu

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2020-08-30 Unido Global
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patrick_john_yu
patrick_john_yu
3 years ago
Commented

i just give up and maybe permanently drop this

patrick_john_yu
patrick_john_yu
3 years ago
Commented

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patrick_john_yu
patrick_john_yu
3 years ago
Commented

I will write my ideas in my draft but maybe if I find someone or if I finish writing the ending I will fix it then pose it again

patrick_john_yu
patrick_john_yu
3 years ago
Replied to Sahs

i agree to your review cause i am really bad at writing and i am not a literature and I don't know what to write about others cause i write what is in my imagination and sorry for the grammar i did not really my forte i got an average grade in school but i forgotten the lesson very easily

patrick_john_yu
patrick_john_yu
3 years ago
Replied to AvoidanceLife88

thank you for reminding me

patrick_john_yu
patrick_john_yu
3 years ago
Replied to

sorry I just realize my blunder of using him not her

patrick_john_yu
patrick_john_yu
3 years ago
Replied to AvoidanceLife88

ok I try thank you for your opinion

patrick_john_yu
patrick_john_yu
3 years ago
Replied to AvoidanceLife88

I modify some parts and thank you for giving me a word count on the second chapter

patrick_john_yu
patrick_john_yu
3 years ago
Replied to AvoidanceLife88

thank you

patrick_john_yu
patrick_john_yu
3 years ago
Posted

this is my first novel and definitely not a novelist. I'm only creating this for my fun and sorry for my grammar because I am only a reader not a writer. English or any thing that require me to write something is not my strength.