Forgot to mention that there were a few instances where the wrong pronoun was used for Theo, unless it was intentionally done but it didn't seem to be 🤔
I like how we're learning the new world Damien suddenly finds himself in through his lens. All of Damien's uncertainty, inner thoughts, and actions make this book a good read. I look forward to seeing how he will navigate this world and how his interactions with Theo will turn out 🤭 Writing is pretty good with minimal to no errors. Story telling is also great. Keep up the good work, Author!
I'm glad Kyle has someone like Ethan and Ethan's family who can give him the love and care he deserves. The story is very dark with lots of extreme negative thoughts, but the author is very good at writing and weaving everything together. I just want to give Kyle a big bear hug and fight off his bullies. He doesn't deserve any of this. I wonder why his family treats him that way... Looking forward to Kyle leaving behind his messed up family and just riding off into the sunset with Ethan 🥰
I really like how both the ML and FL are written, and their overall interactions. It's very relatable and realistic, and that's the appeal of the story. This novel is more of a slow burn, but I look forward to Elara and Terrence's relationship blooming. Very minor grammar and spelling errors, but overall a good job in writing style. Maybe avoid the constant usage of "male" but instead use "him/he" or even his name? Just a suggestion. Keep up the good work though!
Overall interesting plot. I really want to know what happened to her family and who is out to get her. FL isn't some pushover, but is someone strong and level-headed. Also, not much can be said about the ML as he just showed up, although I can't be sure he's actually the ML. If he is, he's an interesting character and I'm intrigued at how he seems to know things. Hopefully he helps the FL unravel the mystery! Writing is good overall with minor errors but it doesn't take away from the trading experience. Plot is also quite interesting. Keep up the good work!
Overall good story with interesting plot points. I really liked how Ethan's and Adrian's love for each other grew and how they became each other's safe place. Looking forward to how their story and love progresses... without their disgusting families... Writing is pretty good with minimal to no errors. Pacing could be a bit faster as I started skimming chapters to speed up reading the story progression. Keep up the good work though!
Overall great read with intriguing characters. I love how the FL is strong and charasmatic, and how she treats this new world she suddenly finds herself in. I also liked the interview, might need to write down a few pointers 📝 Looking forward to reading more of Lilith's adventures! Writing style is pretty good with only minor grammar and spelling errors, but it doesn't take away too much from the reading experience. Keep it up!
Welcome to the group! LOL
"Which bastard dared to make you cry?"
He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband
Urban · ForeverPupa
Ep 8, around 3:44
"I need you." Ruan Nanzhu solemnly uttered.
Kaleidoscope of Death
LGBT+ · littleHua
Sorry for the delayed response! No, this is a separate novel that can be read on its own. The ML's parents are Kate and Henry, which are the leads in another novel by Pupa, He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband 😄
"She is the key point of my success. I will make her a superstar so I can use her against our brother," Lance said.
She Becomes A Hot Sensation After A Scandalous Affair
Urban · ForeverPupa