Erkonomic

I forgot to mention the way wifey refuses to talk it out with general man is she says nothing about her motivations for rebelling which we really only know a snippet of and that snippet makes little sense cus she wants power so she can wage war on another country but like why take over a kingdom to destroy another when you could just as easily take over the kingdom you want to destroy. But she can apparently see the future and there’s this big bad out to cause mayhem I think. It makes no sense

Honestly there are so many plot inconsistencies and illogical thinking that it’s distracting and hella irritating. Also the character design (read as female cus the author doesn’t really care about how the men look) is so basic that I can’t recall any defining characteristics other than I think the fiancé has red hair and the sister is blond. The story, which is supposed to be a simple power trip, is almost completely ruined by the author seemingly writing it out of his ass. You NEED the ability to turn of your brain and refuse using logical thought. The straw that led to me leaving this review is a battle between wifey and a general. The general at this point seems wholly concerned about the stability of the country rather than any friendship he had to the king, he is even willing to talk it out with her after overthrowing the royal family and she just refuses, starts a fight with someone a tier lower than weve seen her kill. So the fight is not just uninteresting, this “top tier scheming, master manipulator, genius” decides im gonna kill this potentially useful assest and generally likable guy for no god damn reason. And you might think why do you thunk hes willing to talk it out? Maybe because we are given direct insight into what he is thinking and there is no indication/ reason that he is an unreliable narrator for like the 2 paragraphs we read as him