Arch_Angel_9839

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Arch_Angel_9839
Arch_Angel_9839
4 years ago
Posted

In needs improvement in writing but the flow of the war miltiary and strategy is well written I like reading thank you Author. but still in needs improvement on the writing quality please some words are not written well.

Arch_Angel_9839
Arch_Angel_9839
4 years ago
Commented

this should be a good synopsis

BlueCrest Academy is one of the best magic schools in the world only students who passed the entrance exam were allowed in, no back door, nothing, squat, zilch, not happening unless you pass the test your good grades and athletics could only get your foot in the door.

The BlueCrest Academy

The BlueCrest Academy

Fantasy · The_RedMagician

Arch_Angel_9839
Arch_Angel_9839
4 years ago
Commented

I like the prologue so amazing for real

Arch_Angel_9839
Arch_Angel_9839
4 years ago
Commented

Amazing chapter 1 it can hook someone if they want a contemporary romance

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Arch_Angel_9839
Arch_Angel_9839
4 years ago
Commented

Tragedyyy noooooooo