Rilson_Lucas

I must say, you're a good writer, but you're moving the story along way too quickly. I already knew the fanfiction was going to have a weak-to-strong progression, but giving the MC the ability to stop time for 4 minutes, perform a super shimmer, and create bombs capable of destroying Piltover’s bridge in just one day is too much. It breaks the story because the only entities capable of stopping this MC now would be god-level creatures (the Aspects, Bard, Aurelion Sol, etc.). I believe the power scaling has gone completely off the rails, and the fanfic has devolved into nothing more than an overpowered MC and wish fulfillment.