NAHYAN09

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Just keep doing what you do. Your writing has improved a lot. Especially the psychological parts where you play with minds.

I understand that some might dislike some parts, but if you've made it this far, you must know my style of writing which focuses on build up towards the climax where everything makes more sense. Please be patient.

Advent of the Three Calamities

Fantasy · Entrail_JI

NAHYAN09

5d

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I was thinking of Sir Miaometh the 2nd.

"I'm not changing your name. I'll think about changing your name after you repent for what you've done. I'm in this state because of you, Pebble."

Advent of the Three Calamities

Fantasy · Entrail_JI

NAHYAN09

1mth

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Isn't that a lot?

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NAHYAN09

1mth

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Deja vu. White haired Amanda?

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NAHYAN09

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I like your writing.

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NAHYAN09

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I am disappointed about the ship.......Well, not like I can do anything about it, I'll just accept it because the story is good. Can't let the romance interfere with the story.If the author thinks this is the best approach then so be it.

ch 379 Volume VI - Chapter 12: The Second Date

The Extra of The Lunerra

Fantasy · WindskyW

NAHYAN09

1mth

Replied to Crestfallen77

There are 3 games

ch 72 [Christina] [1]

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Fantasy · Noob6_writer9

NAHYAN09

1mth

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Man this gave me SSS rank suicide hunter feelings. Especially the part with the children

ch 138 The end of a long journey [2]

Advent of the Three Calamities

Fantasy · Entrail_JI

NAHYAN09

1mth

Commented

I still support Celine x Aiden......

ch 376 Volume VI - Chapter 9: One Last Visit

The Extra of The Lunerra

Fantasy · WindskyW

NAHYAN09

2mth

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That felt like that she had confirmed that Aiden was the same Aiden

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The Extra of The Lunerra

Fantasy · WindskyW

NAHYAN09

2mth

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That sounds familiar

"I want to become a Chad vampire and have three wives fall into my arms," Aimar replied, mirroring his brother's look.

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Fantasy · Noob6_writer9

NAHYAN09

2mth

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Okay these endings and skills are getting weirder and weirder

ch 0 8 Luck is part of the game 2

How to survive in the Romance Fantasy Game

Fantasy · MCPG

NAHYAN09

2mth

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*From

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Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Fantasy · Noob6_writer9

NAHYAN09

2mth

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I think the phrase is, "I hate __(noun/pronoun) with every fiber of my being/body". Fibers are very small and they make up the structure of plants and trees(Humans don't have fibers for their structure rather they have cells). So, if you use 'very fiber' it indicates that the structure of the body is only made out of one fiber, which is wrong.

In fact I hate her, I hate with the very fiber of my being.

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Fantasy · Noob6_writer9

NAHYAN09

2mth

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You should change the verbs into present tense because you already have a "did". You don't say, "I did did it." Rther you say, "I did do it." Double past tense doesn't make sense.

She didn't loved me.

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Fantasy · Noob6_writer9

NAHYAN09

2mth

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Now I don't like Ethan anymore. He sounds like Jayden from Game's villain. Someone who will pursue every single female character rather than making comrades he can trust.

'...Ethan wants revenge against the empire and my mother, anyway. Tell me, what's the best way to make allies when women are involved?'