This is Medieval times, protein wasn’t a very common thing. You were lucky if you got little bit of meat with your meal. most ate bread, which is not very high in protein. This is why when you look back on the dead in ancient times. when we discovered farming, weat and other foods became the staple. when that happened, we grew shorter. because of a lack of meat.
After a few hours of practice, the three friends were on the dirty ground, one of the three was sitting on the ground while the other two were laying down and gasping for air. Marcus and Albert's friend's name was Bernard. He was abnormally tall and bulky, most likely from the training he did since he was little. It was a mystery why did he not become a swordsman, but he will tell them when the time will be right. He was at least 5,8 feet and had short brown hair with kind-looking light brown eyes. He was 15 years old like Albert and just arrived a month ago.
Journey through the chaos (GOT)
Book&Literature · CrowWriter
Thats nice of you. I don’t see people who are nice often. most of the time people get angry and delete my comments.from the bottom of my heart I say thank you.
Bruh you are the most delusional person I’ve ever met. You did not address a single bit of criticism. You are a disappointment in human skin.
Writing a system novel is lazy, no matter what way you put it.
And you have no point so you’re just throwing insults
I am just happy I found a auther who is willing to listen constructive criticism. you would be suprised how meny Authors are not willing to listen to constructive criticism on the site even though sometimes it’s justified, there are many authors who will make a generic system novel and think it’s original or creative. I’m just happy you’re willing to take criticism.
This is just another lazily written system novel. These things appear like ants out of the woodwork. I am astounded that this lazy writing is still widely praised by hundreds of people. Then again these are the same people to enjoy an isekai novel about a main character being a stick. Overall the quality works on the site are terrible.
Also he seems way too young to be fighting battles. Like it’s just unrealistic, to the point where I would say that it actually downgrades the total quality of the work. I’m aware that it’s a fantasy world but I don’t think that gives anybody the excuse. I am also aware that you were definitely not the first to do this not and not the last. Amost fanfics have a tendency to make a character who is overpowered (Typically the mc) overall is just lazy writing. But that’s just with most fanfics.
This is a decent fanfiction. Though it’s still a fanfiction so it’s relatively lazy writing, but other than that I don’t have much to say. It’s just mediocre and the only thing I’m really worried about is a harem, that would really downgrade the quality of this work.
You seem like the kind of guy who is just a little bit too cringe. You reek of narcissism and just a all-around douche bag , you understand nothing about characters and that makes me laugh so fucking hard.You’re honestly the kind of people to be interested in those fucked up stories with the MC does terrible shit just because he’s edgy. You reek of teenage angst so I’m going to ask you politely to shut the fuck up so that people can enjoy the story. The MC is the farthest thing from a cuck because the fact of the matter is, the ladies fucking betrothed to someone. Do you understand how any of that works? honest readin your comments just make me laugh. A site like this which is full of garbage fanfics that have no actual substance to them. When something that’s actually decent shows up you people automatically fucking criticize it just because it isn’t your overpowered MC who cucks everybody else. Believe it or not this story makes more sense than any fucking fan fic you ever could read.
"But... But even though I tried so hard, and it hurt so bad, lady Miriette got hurt anyway!"
Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
Fantasy · Sound_Hammer