Where's the novel? ,. . .. .. ... .... ....
The novel is quite good and I haven't found any grammatical errors yet. What I personally like about this novel is that Ning is just like our normal guy. He knows everything that goes in the cultivation world, and avoids most of the cliches that are harmful for him. His extraordinary ability is his knowledge and watching further crystallize that knowledge into strength is quite fun. Lastly, The most important thing is that this is not a mass produced system novel, Ning just has a panel that shows his attribute and that's it. Overall, I hope the author continues.
You can take it slow Author. But I would like it if you don't drop the novel. So, do you best ^^.
James:
The clear mirror reflected a good-looking blond boy. It was not the normal good-looking, but an over-the-top good-looking with a supernatural charm surrounding him.
Urbano · KyuuSushi
Aiko:
At the same time, hurried footsteps could be heard. A young girl a year or two younger than me appeared before me. She looked carefree with her hair tangled and wearing just a tank top and trousers.
Urbano · KyuuSushi
I posted it from my alter account~
Hi ^^.
I don't like Scum che anyway. So good job Author~
Yeah, Yun Che died due to the fabled Hatched Ending. He provoked too many beauties with his face and technique, building resentment and jealousy among his harem members. Ultimately, they picked up their swords and killed him so that if they can't have him, no one can.
Oriental · Violet_Eve
A reference to how Caulifa became a Super saiyan through a tingly back??
It was a small tingly back feeling. Am I going to become a super sa*yan?
Oriental · Violet_Eve
Let me put in some thoughts in that regard. Thanks for reading~
Idol in the Netherworld (Mairimashita Iruma kun fic)
Anime e Quadrinhos · KyuuSushi