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Bruh.
Hmmm. Maybe more character development and everything is happening kinda fast. Let's recap on what my little brain could remember, it starts with Sol woking up, then a monologue of him being a reincarnated person, met his aunt, smut with the maid, a brief introduction to power leveling, then smu— Oh wait, nevermind. I think the thing I am looking for is a more in-depth look at the characters since the story is going forward "assuming" that the audience knew the characters. I remember getting weird out by the MC sudden "love" for the witch since it came out of nowhere without much explaining why Sol got to that or maybe I just completely missed the literary device used to make such an amazing scene. Still a great story.
6)What do you think the story lack? And what do you think is the greatest strengths of this story?
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Maybe it was just me but I want to know how the magic system works.
5)Would you like more characters development? More fight scenes? More smut scenes?
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
It's good. I'm getting the vibe that I only awakened when I'm reading Rupegia.
1)What do you think of the story overall?
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
kinda fast tbh.
4)What do you think of the pace of the story?
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Hey Sol*
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Yea I think so. Maybe I'm not just used to your writing style or my brain is just tricking me into thinking that your story is fast. 😅
4)What do you think of the pace of the story?
SON OF THE HERO KING (Terminated the contract on WN read the synopsis)
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI