Hello author, I'm so sorry this book didn't work up as well as it deserves to. The story has so much potential in my opinion but I think as you do, the pacing is the weakness of this book. So, of course you should do what's best for you to live out of your work, but I believe that if you rewrite this book to improve its quality, you could have a masterpiece. When I found it, I was also surprised that it wasn't better known and didn't work as well as books of much lower quality (for storyline and writing). Maybe consider improving the abstract to give away more of the character's craziness (that's what people like !) , and putting a more eye-catching book cover (crazy smile 😈, runes, fire 🔥). I haven't read your other work yet, but I assure you that you have potential, so believe in yourself ❤️
Agreed...
Yes, Blake is indeed dating both Alice and Mary.
Idle Mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
"even has... his picture ? 🤔 ... on it."
When he turned back, Felicia was there, respectfully waiting for him. When he got close, she handed him a badge that represented his new status. It even had on it.
Idle Mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
What does he need to ask her for help, he owns the biggest Library of Humanity 🤨
He had been around, visiting places of interest. He also asked for the help of Oracle Felicia so that he can learn more spells.
Idle Mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer
Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
Lv. 0 too,I guess ?
Edit : "got hit"
The people from both the inner and outer city quickly learned of Max Deitor's escape from the Blackfire clan. It was something huge, after all, not only because someone achieved what was considered impossible, but even because the Blackfire Clan's reputation got it because of it.
Godlike: The Rise of a Skill-stealing Rune Master chasing revenge
Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
Again, Qin Yi told him about her childhood early on. Author must have forgotten... 😅
Yun Huan kept holding onto Qin Yi tightly. He obviously knew who Wang Santing was. It was this woman who had ruined the little guy's life. Yun Huan didn't know about Qin Yi's childhood but could make a rough guess regardless.
Rebirth Of The Apocalypse Queen: On Your Knees, Young Emperor!
Sci-fi · The Glass Pearl
I think I missed the "ask nicely" 🤔 Where was it ? 🤔😂
Zheng Zhong was stunned, his handsome face reddening. He had already humbled himself and asked nicely, yet this person had actually rejected him.
Rebirth Of The Apocalypse Queen: On Your Knees, Young Emperor!
Sci-fi · The Glass Pearl
You mean a breakthrough "in" Jiaojiao... 😂😂
Ever since he had a substantial breakthrough with Qin Jiaojiao, she had become even more precious to him. Even though Zheng Zhong had girlfriends before, he had never been so obsessed with them and even wanted to spend a lifetime together.
Rebirth Of The Apocalypse Queen: On Your Knees, Young Emperor!
Sci-fi · The Glass Pearl
Erik ? You mean Sebastian ?
He leaned in closer. "Thou thought thyself a hunter. But in truth, thou art nothing more than a dog chasing its own tail, a fool blinded by his own arrogance and incompetence."
Godlike: The Rise of a Skill-stealing Rune Master chasing revenge
Fantasy · PilgrimJagger