You have all the right to believe in your writing ability. You are genuinely really good at it.
Good chapter. Very exciting. Every time Adrian starts to get personally involved in a conversation through his narration is like gold. The guy's so hypocritical, but you gotta love him for how interesting that makes him.
real good stuff
thanks for the chapter!
This was a good chapter. Thanks for writing!
Sure, I like the story. I'll stick with it. I usually don't comment much so you might not see me too often but I'll be around.
wow, i did not expect you to bring an emotional core to the story so soon. it's a good choice tho cuz then people know that you are writing a story that can get emotional and deep in personal issues and those who would not like it can leave. I felt for Adrian a bit, ngl. Keep up the good work!
Not bad. Not bad at all. We got ourselves a smart protag here. Booksmart, at least. His real intelligence we have yet to see.
I looked over my results quickly, and saw that my overall percentage was 89%. That's pretty good, about as good as I needed it to be for future stuff without drawing too much attention.
The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods
Fantasy · VoxEnozian
Thank you for the notice, author-san!
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A Psychic's Scarlet Dream
Fantasy · Zyanide100
great chapter. very, very good.
The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods
Fantasy · VoxEnozian