VenerableDemon

Interesting

Sansa is boring and spoiled af. Marg is better

It’s better I drop this. Enemies are going to be like cockroad never ending not even dying. You have just killed the avatar verse by bringing in bs over bs. You write good, it’s just you don’t know how to write a main character. I understand his character is based on you. A simp, naive idiot

My god how mc is a naive as fuck. How do you expect people to read this shit

Why does Jon have to be born? It’s extremely stupid. What’s the difference between canon and this then.

Hopefully viserys kills dany. She won’t bend for sure.

Exactly

Good stuff. Hope you update this regularly

Yep this is exactly what I want.

Nice one.