Wow. The work is good. The pacing of the story is measured and stable and nothing has felt too forced so far. My main criticism is that the author is a bit inexperienced and this shows in his character design and use of suspense.
A well written book. I enjoy every description of the characters. (MC) actually. And (yes) it's a very promising novel (if) only the author can make that possible. finish up the novel.
you're just a smart ass!
Subtle creepiness ;)
only three star? :(
Thank you (so much) I'm really glad you pointing out my errors. I'll take full note to see they never occur. I appreciate your comments. (all of it)
thanks for reading.
Thank you so much for your review (appreciated by me) I'll look forward to making scenes less complicated.
Thank you so much. And (yes) your comments has really been a motivation for me.(thanks). I have put the book (Hidden Edges) to a pause. (Sorry). But you can also check out my new release. 1. Seduction: the path to freedom 2. The color of night Thanks. Well, did you just say you're a super girl. Lol. I hope you're doing well, even as you're super busy. Take it easy on yourself and don't forget to breath and drink water. Thanks. Love you too ;)
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original Hidden Edges
4.79
Being married to a Connor, Crystal Anderson is caught up in the family's drama, mystery and tradition. She goes on a family vacation in the woods with her husband, Dylan Connor, Betty and Jake Connor, Dylan's parents where scary truths are unfolded, decisions are made, things are seen, hearts are broken, blood is shed. Is there an escape? If there is, can she really escape?87 Chs 36 Coleções
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The Color of Night
This is novel is based on the true life story of a girl, Altine was was abducted in the course of highway robbery. She was forced to live in captivity till she doubted everything she ever believed in. She is able to get away from her captors only to find she is a captive of her own mind. This story takes us through her struggle to purge herself and live a normal life, plots of revenge as she seeks to find justice for how she was treated and finally to the truth about who she is.5 Chs 4 Coleções
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The Creation Stone
Day, 3000 of Creation. God and the Stone: an incorruptible stone, always scintillating, the source of life, fountain of all the being and principle of all things. This stone produces all and nothing perishes except which it consumes. and from it emanates a little spark which makes all fire of the Sun, of the Moon and the Stars. Victor who is a wandering soul got Captured also along with the saints finds that there's more to creation than he ever knew. He becomes the chosen one to steal the Creation Stone that doesn't appear to any man. Follow Victor on his adventure to acquire the Stone. To read this book, you'll need to adjust your ideas of the creation of the world. This also makes this book hard to understand if you do not read a lot of fantasy books, you'll not be able to see the idea. Your lack of attentiveness is a fault but your Sharp and quick imaginations will paint the pictures. ****If you are searching for MC with a strong mentality and high intelligence or independent and strong Heriones from the start , this is not your thing. This is going to be a very slow pace development in MC character. So rather than having bad reviews, I advice you not to read rather than complain about it.13 Chs 12 Coleções
This is a masterwork novel and there's only a few like it in my opinion. The start of the novel is normal and maybe can be considered as boring but for those who decide to continue they will find the hidden treasure here...The MC is very powerful
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Fantasy · Ak02