As much as I'm enjoying the story, there's something that bothers me a lot. I started reading it because of the yuri tag, but I've already read more than 80 chapters and I don't see any sign of any yuri romance. There's more "romance" and interaction between Issei and his harem than the protagonist with any female character. Yes, she has several female characters from other novels around her, but so far there's not even a romantic interaction with any of them. I feel a bit cheated by the tag, so I'm going to give it a lower rating.
She didn't even mix it up with lies. She pretty much said almost everything about her skills straight away. At that part I wanted to punch MC, she can be really stupid even though she has a technically above average wisdom status. There was no need for her to reveal anything, and now that she has told about her skills, and now they won't let her go or will keep an even closer eye on her. I think you need to zero her wisdom and intelligence, that's the only way to make sense of such stupidity.
As much as I like Nagina and her relationship with the protagonist, I get a little uncomfortable seeing these types of interactions between her and the MC... Like I already expected that their relationship would have this type of interaction +18, but I thought what would it be when Nagina had a more developed/mature body, not in the shape of a 10/12 year old... I feel a little uncomfortable reading these parts because of that, I don't know if this is some kind of lolicon fetish ... I just think it's a little wrong... Anyway, I really like your story, I just felt uncomfortable with this approach, I hope you keep writing the story more ^^
I have a question about An Cheng. Is she about the same height as the protagonist or is she taller? How much more or less tall? It is also wanted to know how many years she is older than the protagonist. Is she like 1 or 2 years older?
Ah yes, I discovered more ahead when I read the later chapters. At first, I thought it was a normal army and such, that's why I was surprised 😅
Well, correct me if I'm wrong, from what I've understood so far, she is a trans woman, plus she is attracted to women, so she seems to be a lesbian too. Transsexuality does not mean the same as homosexuality. The person may be trans and be attracted to the opposite gender (to which they identify) or be attracted to the same gender. 🤔
I found the beginning of the story interesting. I just didn't find a 21-year-old lieutenant very realistic, I think she should be at least 25 years old ... At least in my country it is only possible to be a very young lieutenant when a person enters the army with a university degree. 🤔🤔🤔
Best Christmas present I got this year. A tremendous punch of cuteness and sugar in the stomach. I'm spewing rainbows now! 🥰🥰🥰🦄🌈
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop
I think Batman will think twice before betraying Jennifer. If Kara finds out that he betrayed her best friend, our bat might end up castrated. 😂
Dc: Start Female Superman
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