I've liked it so far. Just some grammatical issues at times but not many of them. so, keep it up man!
Try to include some other shows characters like if u are going with the whole doctor thing u can include shows like House, or some other comedy shows like big bang theory. Just a suggestion.
AN: From here on out things will become more self-made, as the Family is on the other side of the Country. Though they will meet up with them once in a while. However, it will now be mostly focused on college life and stereotypes of college life. Then once this 'arc' is over it will focus on them as young adults and Gabe being a doctor again in his new life.
TV · Anomander_Adaar
Is this going to be a thing where no single topic ever reaches a proper conclusion?
The story and character development is very good. The only issue would be grammar as there are some mistakes but still readable and able to understand.Good Work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
skip to fairy tail reunion, if u want to add something use flashbacks later.
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Ultear: cause why not
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Good one and kind of complete story with not leaving plots unattended. Good work🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟
Take all the power stones u want. But keep the chaps coming.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👈👉👆👇☝️👍🤘🤟🤟✌️
keep it up👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘👍🤘🤘👍🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤟🤟🤞🤞✌️✌️🤏🤏✌️🤞🤞🤟🤟🤟🤟🤞👇🤞🤞🤞☝️☝️☝️🤟👇👇☝️👍🤟🤞🤟🤘🤘🤞🤞🤟☝️☝️👇☝️☝️👇☝️
good work, don't drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The Burnt Prince-GOT SI
Book&Literature · Drkest