I hope you enjoy this series, it gets even more ridiculous later down the line! And apologies in advance that I didn't finish it, I'm working on a half sequel/reboot.
| Stats : | 500% Damage bonus to all spells | | 50% Decrease in Mana Cost | | | Grants " Dragon's Gifted " Race |
Games · BreathingMoon
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Urban · Glasgow1
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Fantasy · BreathingMoon
Can't go wrong with a quiet and simple story like this one, a relatively interesting 'cast' as well as an interesting concept and gimmick. I'd only wish to improve the articulation of the sentences to fit a bit better with reading.
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Thank you for leaving so many positive comments :) I know this novel is a little off at times, but I sincerely hope you enjoy it!
Fuck dude... I got to think about this.
Games · BreathingMoon
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MAINTENANNNNCCEEEE BUUUSSSSTTAAAAAAA
The lady in prim blue uniform had watched in surprise. "Oh—I'm sorry, we're currently under maintenance—"
Fantasy · Magical
Alright: I love the dramatic tension these first chapters set, which is very hard to establish and maintain in certain novels for the most part. Generally, overtime I'd expect it to become a little off-putting, so I pray you manage that well as the series continues. After this spike in tension with the opposing forces, I'd always recommend keeping a dark- gritty tone. I'd recommend using more 'Dirty' feeling words to describe this world to fit the tension, as in litterally describing everything as dusty or damp- something like that. As for everything else, it's quite good.
THE VAMPIRE'S ACCOMPLICE!
Fantasy · Draco_Spectra_238