I either missed a Chapter, which is why i reread the first few Chapter 2 times with no sudden new Chapter appearing, or the Author really just fools around here. What Ritual please? What Summoned from another World? Why does this Girl, Lily, know that he is from another world? And he transmigrated from his old world, as Jaden, to this World, as Austin, who was in the middle of a Class. So why the sudden Ritual & Summon that Lily is talking about... i am Very confused...
Reading Status, Chapter 77: I can say, this Novel is messed up, its goes from one Mess/Drama into the next one, a Dark bunch of Betrayal, sudden Enemies and death. In this Novel you wont find Peace or Hope, just Death, Pain and a moment to breath, only to get betrayal in the next moment. I could have a bit more details, sadly its missing quite a bit of depth & focus on the Drama/Dark ongoing and the Abilities of the MC also need more details, as like this is the Story quite Fast-Paced.
.... Isnt daniel supposen to be Paranoid? Even i would find it strange, that Lust pushed Daniel to wear then Ring, that Daniels knows, that was given by someone else. Yet Lust called MC, to say that Asmodeus is pushing to have Daniel wear the Ring. If this isnt a Trap, with how Asmodeus does know that MC didnt wear the Ring, then i dont know anymore. Paranoid?! I Dont Think So!
Same as Zeravar, first its a Gio Fish, and then its called Flood Dragon, and its a Human Head with Tentacle hair, how could this be even a Flood Dragon in any way?!
"Two bath thumbs"... I hope you mean bathtubs, only this would make sense.
Then he went to the innkeeper and asked for two bath thumbs for the girls.
Return of the Cultivation Lord
Fantasy · darklord86
"Luca knew that his Senior Sister Lucia had a Sharp sense"- It should be Sophia it his Line, as Lucia is Luca's Teacher. "Back in the bedroom, Sophia, who" - It should be Fratis and not Sophia in this Line.
Here is the Word "ears" missing, from "Fluffy ears popped"
Shen Yu began laughing and patted her head with his other hand. Suddenly, a pair of fluffy popped out on her hand along with a long purple tail.
Divine Harem: My Sect of Heavenly Beauties
Eastern · GodOfLust
"rubbed the Bride" should be "rubbed the bridge of her nose"
Just like her, Qing Zhiyan also figured it out and couldn't help but sign. She rubbed the bride of her nose and asked.
Divine Harem: My Sect of Heavenly Beauties
Eastern · GodOfLust
That is what i always expected from Daniel, the MC! Several Artifact/Chips or daily worn things, that observe the Health of the People who wear it, Daniels Family, and able to raise a Shield or send a Signal to send Support in few Seconds. And maybe Shoot a Laser, that is capable to destoy the World, the kill the Attacker of said Family member!
Miracle Card Shop: All My Cards Can Be Actualize
Urban · RavenClaw471