I found your comment about Brazil and Uganda interesting, especially because Portuguese is a language derived from Latin, and it would be even easier to understand the pronunciation needed to cast the spells.
Reading the current chapters (1-16 rewrite) the story has improved a lot, some problems still exist, but I won't mention them, as they don't affect the reading that much, good luck with your story, I'll keep reading
What's the point of this caution with vampires? I understand the fae, given their OP abilities, but vampires... The only one who would have any problem with them would be Natasha, and even then, with her abilities and strategies, she could easily take one down.
The story has potential, but the protagonist and the writing style kill the interest of reading, I skipped most of the descriptions and dialogues because they repeat the same thing, over and over between chapters, breaking the reading immersion and the connection with the story in general (Google Translate)
King's luck must be at least 1000+ 😂😂😂😂
It happens man, amazing story I'll be waiting for new chapters
Scott's girlfriend is called Kira
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I also hate these gay novels, I don't see the appeal and as soon as I see any indication of homosexual relationships with the protagonist I stop reading
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