Fun fact, while holding ace she really said Gol D. Ace
"So, his name shall be Gol D. Ace," she said, slowly kissing the crying baby on the head before looking at his twin. The twin no longer cried, nor did he waive his small hands around like before. Instead, he seemed to be fighting to keep his heavy eyelids open.
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In the original ff Garp later took only Jackson for an extended time of training since Ace wouldn’t be able to keep up. Can’t it be more situational?
'Well, if Ace is with Gramps, then everything's probably fine.'
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Cause I want to finish the story but at the same time don’t really want to continue it. Might sound strange can’t explain it well but the gist of it is that I thought it could help me
He wasn’t around when Garp took Ace and MC didn’t go around towns beating people and acting depressed. Didn’t mean to start discussing woulds and wouldn’ts in a ff since it’s all made up anyways but that were my thoughts behind that.
'Well, if Ace is with Gramps, then everything's probably fine.'
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Just a few point but will focus more on grammar and such
Im keeping them until I finish the rewriting since people wished for them
Im rewriting the story in hopes it will help me to finish it. Old chaps are being reuploaded as aux chaps until I’m done with rewriting
Yeah just a tiny little problem popped up will have to wait till tomorrow night. Sorry for that
Another reader that stuck around for years 🙌 man glad to see you
"Hah! Big words for someone who decided to run around blindfolded, kissing every tree in the forest," Ace retorted, clearly enjoying my misery. "What exactly were you trying to train? Your resistance to basic human intelligence or your ability to make dumb decisions?"
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Here
One Piece: Like father like son!
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