At any rate, this incident allowed me to understand my ancient will a tiny bit more. So I will need to try to keep better control over my emotions when I engage in battle, or I might end up losing my mind and turning to the dark side.
Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System
Fantasy · invayne
I will only mention something negative since i can't bother mentioning all the positives (which is a lot more). Imho, you use the name "Alex" way too often. Alex thought... Alex ran, Alex didn't, Alex wished etc.. Just count how many times you use his name in a single chapter. I would suggest you use 'he' or 'I' more often. And as he ran back... He thought that was all but... etc I couldn't believe my eyes... I wonder if thats... etc Instead of Alex couldn't believe his eyes, Alex wondered if thats... etc Just a tip from a reader, thats all. cheers
numbers are inconsistent and where is the system all of a sudden? I haven't seen any stats for over... 70 chapters?
So many red flags everywhere... sigh
"That's right," Rose continued, "the sect only accepts females, so we won't have to worry about any annoying young master tropes that'll cause us more trouble in the long run."
Void Evolution System
Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
LIN FENG!
Damien nodded, hiding the slightly disappointed look in his eyes. 'It would have been fun to become Tian Long or Yang Lintian or something.'
Void Evolution System
Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
It's: Disciple greets master.
Yh true, but he can get this deal right now, probably without much risk, or he can try to maximize his benefits but with more risks probably. What if he gets robbed for example?
Samuel who was a little taken aback by her decisiveness had no idea what his work was worth in the first place. He didn't even know the worth of a hundred thousand spirit stones. But seeing the shocked reaction on Eva's face, it's must be a lot. Selling it right now would save him lots of effort and will immediately solve all his money problems. Feeling he could trust them, he decided to agree to her proposal.
The Art of Cultivation
Fantasy · NinjasEverywhere
Because this was my first novel and more of a learning experience for me. Pls let me know what you liked and didn't like about this novel so I can learn for my next novel! Thank you!
It didn't take long for news to spread as in no time, from one village to the other, everybody heard about it. More and more people started visiting the village, they all wanted to see the miracle with their own eyes. After confirming the truth they started bringing in their sick and each and every one of them got healed, no exceptions! Thousands and thousands of people started to worship him. They prayed to the heavens for his good health and brought food and gifts to the village. They all wanted to meet him, curious to see this child blessed by the heavens, the boy behind the painting.
The Art of Cultivation
Fantasy · NinjasEverywhere
Hi, my apologies but I dropped this novel. This was my first novel and a learning experience for me. I dropped this because I wasn't satisfied with the story myself and it didn't really get much attention. Plus, I really really really wanted to write another story which I'm working on atm, but will only start releasing when I have a lot of chapters ready so I don't have to stress about release rates. I was writing this story as a complete amateur without any preparation what so ever and I made a lot of rookie mistakes and thats why I dropped it and take this learning experience with me while I'm writing the next one. Anyway, I'm really sorry but just can't find the motivation to continue this one.
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original The Art of Cultivation
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Samuel, an unprecedented prodigy the world has never seen before, sets out on an epic journey of cultivation where he experiences life, death, and everything in between. No life is easy, as every up has its downs. An emperor may rule his subjects, but is also often lonely, unable to trust a single soul. Then what about the life of a genius? An intellect? An artist? ###### Warning! Although not it's main focus, this story does include violent and sexual content, hence the R18 tag. There will never be any extremes like rape or ntr though, please rest assured. ###### Planned release rate: Daily. See sticky review for more info and Q/A.26 Chs 340 Coleções
It’s The Prince Again…
Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System
Fantasy · invayne