EldurJaalind

EldurJaalind

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I am an author with multiple book series' that are ongoing.

2019-11-19 Unido United States
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EldurJaalind
EldurJaalind
2 years ago
Commented

hol' up

EldurJaalind
EldurJaalind
2 years ago
Commented

Ah, yes, consumerism.

Each floor had dozens of rooms with different types of VR gears in them, depending on what type of game one would play.

Gods' Impact Online

Gods' Impact Online

Games · NoWoRRyMaN

EldurJaalind
EldurJaalind
2 years ago
Replied to Jack_Nades

for real, where are my mediocre genes at?

Shay squinted his eyes and furrowed his brows at Zach, and said, "Who are you kidding?! You won a 10 million dollar lottery last week, didn't you?"

Gods' Impact Online

Gods' Impact Online

Games · NoWoRRyMaN

EldurJaalind
EldurJaalind
2 years ago
Commented

introducing characters like this is unnatural I'm sure you know this now, but I still find it worth mentioning. Instead of outright telling these things, you could use plot devices to show their dreams, circumstances, and physical traits.

Kayden, 18 years old, has dark brown hair, black eyes, and a bodybuilder. He was Zach's childhood friend. But unlike Zach, he was popular because of his sturdy build. He was going to inherit his father's tech business.

Gods' Impact Online

Gods' Impact Online

Games · NoWoRRyMaN

EldurJaalind
EldurJaalind
2 years ago
Replied to Zenna73

heck if I remember. been a while since I read it

"Daneel, such a solution cannot be made by one who is not at least an Eminent Warrior Mage. I've studied a small sample. The skill in magic required to cast a spell that uses such intricate particle manipulation is incomparable to any Exalted Human Mage like me. Of course, no matter how talented you are, it is impossible that you have reached that level. In fact, even the Grand Court Mage, who is the second strongest mage in the Kingdom, is also only an Exalted Human Mage. Who is the personage helping you, Daneel?"

World Domination System

World Domination System

Fantasy · KillerHemboy

EldurJaalind
EldurJaalind
3 years ago
Replied to Raisgem

I know, I was correcting, lol

Li's first reaction was to walk up to a tree and place his palm on its trunk. He realized then how distinctly inhuman he was. He was almost three meters tall with a body comprised of wood, leaves, and bones.

Re: Level 100 Farmer

Re: Level 100 Farmer

Fantasy · John_Doever

EldurJaalind
EldurJaalind
3 years ago
Replied to Khalil_Ziad_Issam

a bit late, but eh. a tiara is a crown typically worn by princesses.

This woman was most uncommon: gorgeous, elegant, and with one outstanding difference from all others in the hall—she wore a tiara.

My Pick Up Artist System

My Pick Up Artist System

Urban · SamsaraWithWords

EldurJaalind
EldurJaalind
3 years ago
Replied to Martin_Watson

easy calculation and inflation

In this world, the money was divided into four coins: copper, silver, gold, and royal coins. 100 copper=1 silver, 100silver=1 gold, and 100 gold=1 royal.

Gacha Sovereign

Gacha Sovereign

Fantasy · Fixten

EldurJaalind
EldurJaalind
3 years ago
Replied to Raenatta

I learned as I wrote, I don't write for cinnamon rolls.

EldurJaalind
EldurJaalind
3 years ago
Replied to Raenatta

You assumed correctly. Y'see, I enjoy cliches.

  • Ancient Cultivation original

    Ancient Cultivation

    Eastern ACTION REINCARNATION SYSTEM CULTIVATION EASTERN

    3.84

    Beastmen, humans, dragons; in ancient China these three races are dominant and constantly fight one another aiming to be the apex of cultivation. Alphonse, a man who was reincarnated as a beastman suffers through a childhood of hardships as he goes through the world of cultivation, aiming to never again be tortured or allow the ones close to him to get hurt. WARNING: This book is not all cupcakes and rainbows, if you don't like it, then don't read it and find something else for your fragile mind. (This is primarily a joke, but seriously, I have written some dark themes in this book, so don't read it if you don't like that idea.)

    58 Chs 152 Coleções

  • Elizabeth's Misfortune original

    Elizabeth's Misfortune

    Fantasy CAMPUS

    Growth obstructing cellular regeneration disorder. contrary to its name it is quite dangerous and can lead to death. Follow Elizabeth, a young girl with GOCRD who tries her best to stay with her morals.

    21 Chs 26 Coleções