Ah, yes, consumerism.
Each floor had dozens of rooms with different types of VR gears in them, depending on what type of game one would play.
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
for real, where are my mediocre genes at?
Shay squinted his eyes and furrowed his brows at Zach, and said, "Who are you kidding?! You won a 10 million dollar lottery last week, didn't you?"
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
introducing characters like this is unnatural I'm sure you know this now, but I still find it worth mentioning. Instead of outright telling these things, you could use plot devices to show their dreams, circumstances, and physical traits.
Kayden, 18 years old, has dark brown hair, black eyes, and a bodybuilder. He was Zach's childhood friend. But unlike Zach, he was popular because of his sturdy build. He was going to inherit his father's tech business.
Games · NoWoRRyMaN
heck if I remember. been a while since I read it
"Daneel, such a solution cannot be made by one who is not at least an Eminent Warrior Mage. I've studied a small sample. The skill in magic required to cast a spell that uses such intricate particle manipulation is incomparable to any Exalted Human Mage like me. Of course, no matter how talented you are, it is impossible that you have reached that level. In fact, even the Grand Court Mage, who is the second strongest mage in the Kingdom, is also only an Exalted Human Mage. Who is the personage helping you, Daneel?"
Fantasy · KillerHemboy
I know, I was correcting, lol
Li's first reaction was to walk up to a tree and place his palm on its trunk. He realized then how distinctly inhuman he was. He was almost three meters tall with a body comprised of wood, leaves, and bones.
Fantasy · John_Doever
a bit late, but eh. a tiara is a crown typically worn by princesses.
This woman was most uncommon: gorgeous, elegant, and with one outstanding difference from all others in the hall—she wore a tiara.
Urban · SamsaraWithWords
easy calculation and inflation
In this world, the money was divided into four coins: copper, silver, gold, and royal coins. 100 copper=1 silver, 100silver=1 gold, and 100 gold=1 royal.
Fantasy · Fixten
I learned as I wrote, I don't write for cinnamon rolls.
You assumed correctly. Y'see, I enjoy cliches.
hol' up
Name- Shay Ramsay.
Gods' Impact Online
Games · NoWoRRyMaN