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I don't like that there are so many conversations going on, and I don't see the point in writing every thought of the characters. As they say show, don't tell. And I think the novel has problems with this.

I used to love a stories about revenge, but after the act of revenge, they become boring. Plus after a while you start to wonder what the point of revenge is. Well, the main character took revenge, what's next? I hope that this is not just another story about revenge and the plot will be interesting.

In all stories, the Oracles make the same mistake over and over again. They become the cause of their own predictions.

What a stupid plot twist. Let me guess, they get attacked by a rival/enemy of the family, the bodyguards don't do their job, and the gg saves the sisters and kills the bad guys. MC is hero and without him all would have died of helplessness.

I haven't seen such a shameless display of plot armor for a long time. And the diamond is not durable, it is hard, there is a difference.

Oh, of course, those ubiquitous impurities. Pretty predictable. Though I have to give it credit, I didn't expect the book to live up to its title. I was pleasantly surprised.

successfully skipped information garbage.

I feel like this workout routine has become cliché and starting to get a little annoying. Originally added as a joke, some writers thought it was a great exercise, but it's actually far from the truth.