VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey

male LV 1

I'm creating a world where my story and maybe others take place. Summoned and Unwanted might span up to 2000+ chapters before it ends with 8 to 9 seasons. I hope the fans like the story.

2019-09-14 Unido Malta
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VisualKoFey
VisualKoFey
3 years ago
Replied to AbysallNight

I'm sorry but I went the slow way and he has changed after the current events up until the last chapter I released today. I tried to make it to be a bit relistic but it ended up being a little bit drawn out.

VisualKoFey
VisualKoFey
3 years ago
Replied to DaoistorA7EW

Thank you. I appreciate your help. I fixed the error, and I don't have an editor. I use Grammarly for spelling mistakes and stuff like that. It didn't show as an error, so I thought it was fine. English isn't my primary language.

VisualKoFey
VisualKoFey
3 years ago
Replied to 6_Void_King_9

I made the MC as a growth-type character with two powers. A mysterious hero power and a boost-type mutation power. The more he experiences and connections he makes, the stronger he becomes.

VisualKoFey
VisualKoFey
3 years ago
Replied to Viduus

You are correct, but I am showing the story of the MC in the new world and not if or went he goes back to Earth with the book now working differently after Kevin, the writer of the book dies. The MC might appearance a change in the time difference in both worlds. I hope this can help you understand from my perspective of the storytelling.

VisualKoFey
VisualKoFey
3 years ago
Posted

I read eight chapters but I can say that this is a great story of witches showing the past to the next generation witch to take revenge for them. However, they forget that the MC isn't a tool, but a living being. The story has a great potential, keep it up.

VisualKoFey
VisualKoFey
3 years ago
Replied to Sagely_pervert

Oh he will.

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VisualKoFey
VisualKoFey
3 years ago
Replied to ItBeLikeThat

All he knows is that he should be able to transfer back after a hundred years and that the book doesn't say what happens after that. But he is forgetting how the book is also working differently as well since he was summoned earlier than those before him.

Vincent closed his eyes and wished for all days to be filled without worry and enjoy his hundred years in this world with Ester, Lupa, and Kazumi.

Summoned and Unwanted

Summoned and Unwanted

Fantasie · VisualKoFey

VisualKoFey
VisualKoFey
3 years ago
Posted

The story has a good start with all the details needed to help the reader understand what is happening and what her personality is like. The writing is good, well placed, and easy to read. I recommend anyone stumbling on this story to give it a go.

VisualKoFey
VisualKoFey
3 years ago
Posted

I read a few chapters and I say it has a good start. The two characters have a good synergy yet they feel far and different enough to learn something from each other. I recommend this and hope the best it can evolve into a fantastic story. Keep it up.

VisualKoFey
VisualKoFey
3 years ago
Posted

A good start so far. I hope the story can focus more on what the MC is doing as it can help readers understand better what is happening around the MC, but other than that, the story makes you want to know what is going to happen next. Overall, I recommend anyone finding this story to take their time and give this story a go.

  • Summoned and Unwanted original

    Summoned and Unwanted

    Fantasie ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC MYSTERY HAREM ISEKAI KINGDOMBUILDING MUTATION

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    Vincent lost his parents at a young age to an unknown infection that mysteriously spread in a large city which was holding a massive worldwide event. He survives but he becomes mutated by the infection. In the end, he blamed himself for his parents' deaths because he was the one who insisted on visiting the event. Years later, Vincent meets with an infected survivor named Kevin, who helped him heal his heart. However, not all stories have a happy ending. Unfortunately, Kevin would pass away ten years later and leave a book with heroic tales as promised behind. However, the book wasn't as it seemed and after Vincent reads the book, it teleports him to the world the book depicts. A world of sword and magic with a horrible twist. Heroes are referred to as invaders, so people hate, persecute, and kill any otherworldy hero summoned to their world. As an oddity to the world and possessing an oddity residing in his body, Vincent becomes the only person in the world to awaken two classes. A Hero and a Mutation class. The more retainers he acquires, the stronger he becomes through mutation. This is the journey where Vincent starts from naive to brave, zero to a hero. From a single young adult to a harem king, from a nobody to an important person to many. As Vincent tries to survive with people he can trust, he would receive many titles such as Harem King, God, Miracle Worker, Hero, Husband, Master, King, Monster, and many more. Multiple questions will haunt Vincent's thoughts while living in the new mystical and strange world. Go back to Earth? Protect his new loved ones? Find the mystery of the teleporting book? Or create a haven where he and his loved ones can live in peace? These questions are for the readers of the book of heroes to discover as his story unveils itself. _________________________________ Chapter words 1,800+ (1-182) Chapter words 1,600+ (183+) _________________________________ Discord https://discord.gg/CSg5Baf ________________________________

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